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First shot at a more complex sketch ....

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by cheps, Aug 5, 2002.

  1. cheps

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    First shot at a more complex sketch ....

    Discussion started by cheps - Aug 5, 2002

    I did this one the other day.

    http://cheps.homestead.com/files/ChepsDrip2.jpg'>

    Critique please. :dazed:

    -A
     
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  2. swif1

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    swif1 - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    work on your hand.

    practice on your drips.

    lessen the drips.

    try to keep the letters the same width.

    at least i tried to critque :D
     
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  3. MrMajicMarkker

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    MrMajicMarkker - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    you suck balls. your hand is disgusting. how can someone try to work on a complex sketch without any hand whatsoever? oh yeah, and lose the extra bars coming off your letters, they are not only unnecessary, but they are fucking ugly.
     
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  4. Dr. Dazzle

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    Dr. Dazzle - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    This really isn't the place to find encouragment......
     
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  5. ~DeNtOnE~

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    ~DeNtOnE~ - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    find what letter you like out of your name draw it the way you want it then make all your other letters do the same foram?(sp) like if you ever saw zestos summer school tread one letter that can be many .. somthing like that! hope it helps
     
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    ass hairball - Replied Aug 5, 2002


    Dont even do drips just focus on the letters and the color.

    keep workign on it
     
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  7. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    Nah, trust me, this is the last place i would look for encouragement, I just ignore the dipshit comments and take honest ones, thats why im on the site .....

    -A
     
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  8. DRIPONERS

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    DRIPONERS - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    MY NAME IS DRIP AND I NEVER HAVE PUT DRIPS AROUND IT LIKE THAT ONLY BIG FAT ONES OFF THE LETTERS OH YEA CHECK OUT THE ALBUQUERQUE THREAD IT SHOWS MY INFLUENCES
     
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    Arson.85.ATG - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    i'm not gonna break ur heart kid...um well ur hand is pretty ugly....ur lettes they aight...atleast it was an attempt at some complex shit...its not that bad, but its not exactly proper shit either...its fine......lesses the dripps alot...u over did that...and ur outlines ok...its getting better....stay up n keep doing ur shit...u'll get better....
    P.E.A.C.E. = Positive Energy Always Creates Elevation:idea:
     
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  10. swif1

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    swif1 - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    who told you that? that shit is dope. :)
     
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    cazper - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    in what way is that "complex"?
     
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  12. THEdude

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    THEdude - Replied Aug 5, 2002

    take the honest ones?
    people were being honest.
     
  13. melt

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    melt - Replied Aug 6, 2002

    i still think you should keep it simple. lose the drips, the width on the top of the e, the bar under the s, the whole bottom level. hope i helped.
     
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    porque - Replied Aug 6, 2002

    ...if i ever saw that painted on a wall i would destroy it with a bunch of throwies...but i guess that will never happen since i really doubt you actually paint...but if you actually are planning on taking graff seriously at some point you, and most everyone else reading this, need to understand that graffiti does not exist in a notebook, it exists in the real world, the shit in your notebook is just drawings, it's not graff...untill you go out in the real world and try to paint you won't understand why everyone is telling you to get simpler...would it have reallymade you feel that great if you had posted this and everyone said, "dope shit man, go crush some trains!"...you knew that woudn't happen, just look around on this site for inspiration and look at your drawings and the drawings of others and you can see the things that seperate them, being able to push yourself to get better is what it takes to last and actually make a name for yourself, not going around and always seeking approval from other people...and remember one other important thing, you can draw the best outline in the world, but that doesn't mean you can paint it...


    ...your hand is the worst thing i have ever seen in my entire life...
     
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  15. swif1

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    swif1 - Replied Aug 6, 2002

    word up to that, yo; HAHAAHHAHAHA
     
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