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First shot at a more complex sketch ....

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by cheps, Aug 5, 2002.

  1. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    I did this one the other day.


    Critique please. :dazed:

  2. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 29
    work on your hand.

    practice on your drips.

    lessen the drips.

    try to keep the letters the same width.

    at least i tried to critque :D
  3. MrMajicMarkker

    MrMajicMarkker New Jack

    Joined: Jul 20, 2001 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    you suck balls. your hand is disgusting. how can someone try to work on a complex sketch without any hand whatsoever? oh yeah, and lose the extra bars coming off your letters, they are not only unnecessary, but they are fucking ugly.
  4. Dr. Dazzle

    Dr. Dazzle Veteran Member

    Joined: Nov 19, 2001 Messages: 8,147 Likes Received: 3
    This really isn't the place to find encouragment......
  5. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

    Joined: May 6, 2002 Messages: 1,072 Likes Received: 0
    find what letter you like out of your name draw it the way you want it then make all your other letters do the same foram?(sp) like if you ever saw zestos summer school tread one letter that can be many .. somthing like that! hope it helps
  6. ass hairball

    ass hairball Junior Member

    Joined: May 5, 2002 Messages: 233 Likes Received: 0

    Dont even do drips just focus on the letters and the color.

    keep workign on it
  7. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    Nah, trust me, this is the last place i would look for encouragement, I just ignore the dipshit comments and take honest ones, thats why im on the site .....



  9. Arson.85.ATG

    Arson.85.ATG New Jack

    Joined: Sep 9, 2001 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    i'm not gonna break ur heart kid...um well ur hand is pretty ugly....ur lettes they aight...atleast it was an attempt at some complex shit...its not that bad, but its not exactly proper shit either...its fine......lesses the dripps alot...u over did that...and ur outlines ok...its getting better....stay up n keep doing ur shit...u'll get better....
    P.E.A.C.E. = Positive Energy Always Creates Elevation:idea:
  10. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 29
    who told you that? that shit is dope. :)
  11. cazper

    cazper New Jack

    Joined: Apr 26, 2002 Messages: 56 Likes Received: 0
    in what way is that "complex"?
  12. THEdude

    THEdude Guest

    take the honest ones?
    people were being honest.
  13. melt

    melt Guest

    i still think you should keep it simple. lose the drips, the width on the top of the e, the bar under the s, the whole bottom level. hope i helped.
  14. porque

    porque Senior Member

    Joined: May 5, 2002 Messages: 1,844 Likes Received: 0
    ...if i ever saw that painted on a wall i would destroy it with a bunch of throwies...but i guess that will never happen since i really doubt you actually paint...but if you actually are planning on taking graff seriously at some point you, and most everyone else reading this, need to understand that graffiti does not exist in a notebook, it exists in the real world, the shit in your notebook is just drawings, it's not graff...untill you go out in the real world and try to paint you won't understand why everyone is telling you to get simpler...would it have reallymade you feel that great if you had posted this and everyone said, "dope shit man, go crush some trains!"...you knew that woudn't happen, just look around on this site for inspiration and look at your drawings and the drawings of others and you can see the things that seperate them, being able to push yourself to get better is what it takes to last and actually make a name for yourself, not going around and always seeking approval from other people...and remember one other important thing, you can draw the best outline in the world, but that doesn't mean you can paint it...

    ...your hand is the worst thing i have ever seen in my entire life...
  15. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 29
    word up to that, yo; HAHAAHHAHAHA