Decyferon Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 yea i was thinking pink blue and yellow maybe gonna have to put some real work on this maybe redo a couple times as for normal battle thread lol dont wanna be ripped for being toy (although I am) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xTANEx Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 critss? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 try doing simpler letters to begin with, I dont know the letters just look uncomfortable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xTANEx Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 try doing simpler letters to begin with, I dont know the letters just look uncomfortable ive already like done throws with simple letters. so I figured I would change it up a bit. but how are they "uncomfortable" so I can try to improve on thatt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 post up some of your throws dude, coz switching it up? that looks bad, your e looks retarded Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 ive already like done throws with simple letters. so I figured I would change it up a bit. but how are they "uncomfortable" so I can try to improve on thatt I suppose I mean there is no flow to them, it just looks off, I wish I could be more descriptive to help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xTANEx Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 I suppose I mean there is no flow to them, it just looks off, I wish I could be more descriptive to help haha its alright dude. thanks anyways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 k looks better but i need to work on the c... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FASEUNKNOWN Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 yo tane. dont write tone. dumbass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xTANEx Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 yo tane. dont write tone. dumbass. why?. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendicott Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 RUCK --- your U looks like a 4.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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xTANEx Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 you're trying way to hard to get criticism... you just posted that, it's not like there were any other posts afterwards, slow down. and ruck's 'u's fine just looks at persue, he bands the bar down far as hell some times Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 RUCK --- your U looks like a 4.... not really. just looks at persue, he bands the bar down far as hell some times ^^^ questionmark? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roa1 Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 tone- your name is popular, so dont be suprised if u get hastled,,, on your letters, there nice, well balanced just fix the top of your T ruck- i like your normal straight letters better but do your thing... just take out the lump on your K safe?- if that is an F go simpler, i like the rest of your letters but make the left leg of your A thicker. evolution from tonight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaddaBING Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 hey everyone, new here, lookin for some feedback. just registered at bombingscience as well so im gonna just copy paste my first post there. peace.... i'll give some crits first. i hate that words. crit. anyway... Safe - i agree with roas about the left leg of the a. and yea,'fuck that f.' otherwise i like much. Tone- i like your bubbles. i'm not so good with bubbles, as you'll see in a sec. the only thing i don't like is that line on the left in the middle bar of the E. dunno why. Ruck- it looks damn good. maybe shorten up the extension on the u just a bit. Roas- Small world eh?? copy paste: this is the very first sketch i've done trying to incorporate things like arrows, bits and connectors. extended a bit on the letters as well. I realize my letter structuring isn't the greatest, but i think they flow together pretty well. i was proud it came out so well. and yes, there is a bit of biting in this one, but we're imitators by nature and i think that's the best way to learn and find your own style. i didn't directly copy tho. gonna work on figuring out a color scheme next. just looking for a bit of constructive criticism...total time was about 3-4 hours. yes i'm slow!!:) oh yea, heres my throwup design. and this was just me playing around with exact measurements and some markers. (i.e. boredom) fucked up the outline but eh. I know the sketch is a little advance for someone at my experience, i'll put up some simpler shit later. don't be afraid to rip me a new ass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 reas i like them, the first ones shadow looks cool & wake im really diggin' that throwy, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r.i.p. no Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 jesus.u cant be serious.his throw it the worst.of his post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 everyone has different tastes... but i dont really like the e on it other than that to me it looks aight and the k could use a little tweaking, but i like the w and the a also i dont like the double forcefield. one color looks better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaKoS OnEr Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 the only gd thing in that post is the last pic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 sorry but i agree with klendif.. Needa lay off the extensions and stuff for now and get your letter structure down more before you start with the extensions. It's not terrible, I've seen worse, but still you needa practice more :P. And on the throw, I don't really like any of it.. I like the last one though, wake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaddaBING Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 Thanks guys so far. Specially donald, you were most informative. Don't be sorry. The sketch was mainly for experimentation purposes, Never done anything like that. This is one reason I like graff, it doesn't satisfy my ego AT ALL. There like a constant hunger to get better. :) And yea, I'm not a fan of my throw either. I like my e tho. Anyhow, out of curiousity I went through your guys' older posts just to check out your stuff. Klendif and Donal you guys are lookin good. I really like yours klendif. Spaer. All I see throughout your archive is MAAAD shit talking and not ONE picture. What the fuck bro.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 the finished...decided to just add a hand..sryy cudnt look up that artist SPark but will do asap.. fuking around in my art class..whenever tehres a break. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 not bad freak i quite like your ish yes another one haha im going to get this one up pretty soon in the next few days so i'll post pics. i did one on my wall at home looks pretty good on a wall so stay tuned for that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 not really. just looks at persue, he bands the bar down far as hell some times ^^^ questionmark? what i meant was_ the only way i could see anyone saying that loooks similar to a '4' is because on the right side, thing that's liek the straighter part of the 'u' kicks down a little bit. and i was saying that persue bangs that down farther than you have it some times. and it still doesn't look like a 4. so i dunno where he's gettin' that from. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 lol ok sleep time... the bad spelling threw me off, and i didn't realize persue was a graff head haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 \ Spaer. All I see throughout your archive is MAAAD shit talking and not ONE picture. What the fuck bro.... [/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r.i.p. no Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 o ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poko Posted March 14, 2008 Share Posted March 14, 2008 exchange with disko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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