WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 fax, take it from someone who started out like you, just do simples i.e. FAX yokai, youre really improving its great to see your stuff man[: dahr youve come a long way and your stuff just keeps getting bettter i aint no master graffiti writer, im actually quite toy, hence me posting here, but i thought id actually comment on some stuff for once[: here are some sketches ive done, hopefullly ive improved, crits and advice are wanted[: OLD TO NEW: _______________________________________________ ive learned that shit doesnt need to have hundreds of extensions and hella different colors, or even crazy lokote 3d to look good, as long as you have letter structure, little extra effects make it look good. yo man thanks for the repley i just been readin posts one by one. this one helps me and im gonna try to improve my skills by learning step by step a n d MR. LIF iif u guys aint seatrched him u be sleepin. which is the cousin of death Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 heres a page of a's since 'bucket/12oz was fuckin up for days... i like it. i take back my crits for the most part after looking a second time as your lines are pretty clean as far as i can see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 damn its friday and only 1130 some shit where i am i might try and finish something i was woekin on while blazin but if i dont ill post somethin by the next week;;aaaaaaa yea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 the shadow is fucked haha idk what i was doing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 the shadow is fucked haha idk what i was doing. yo man i been seein ur writes and its nice to see you freakin it a little more. or a yea just i like that and ur crits on ur own work are better than mine in my opinion. mine are - the O and S look unbalanced especially the S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 some dank bud. it had some purp on it. the pic doesnt show it tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 only 999 more times fax then you can do the same thing 1000 times more except with 3d!! Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr having trouble with the E to N connection... some input on that would help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 having trouble with the E to N connection... some input on that would help the e looks less defined on the sides than the other letters or there is too much gap in them or once again i might not be right it looks cool to me tho . and the pic is random Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dripz1 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 Just. Somthing im working on?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 the e looks less defined on the sides than the other letters or there is too much gap in them or once again i might not be right it looks cool to me tho . and the pic is random I didn't mean with that one the other sketches lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pest 2 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 quickies....crits please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 yo dripz, that shit looks pretty fresh so far cant wait to see a finished product man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Criminal I can't stand it,or understand it yet my torture was expanded By thoughts that he commanded, had a vision of my uncle sitting down By himself, meanwhile he's breaking down my physical health Chronicle inseperable thoughts, to my head 98 percent of which were absorbed by my dreads The other 2 percent I accepted, just so I can feel the heat again Had a vision of my defeat of him Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 i just did these, 1st time EVER trying cursive lettering critique that shit porfas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grieves_One Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 me gusto. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Fax...you're doing it wrong, why don't you listen to us? Gems your stuff is dope! and saon those are pretty nice! just try and clean it up a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 only 999 more times fax then you can do the same thing 1000 times more except with 3d!! Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr Untitled by Sheen Art, on Flickr having trouble with the E to N connection... some input on that would help heres some more of mine crits and props please!! plOx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 sheen your getting better keep practicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 thanls. im gonna try painting the 3rd one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Your simples are nice, but i'm not really feelin your throw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeedBurns Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 sorry for posting wack shit but that doesnt mean i havnt listened. saon the o to n is kind of weird the o could loop at the top to start the n instead of that line ssquigling out of it. but i think it looks cool and im gonna stop posting flicks for a while Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dripz1 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Your simples are nice, but i'm not really feelin your throw Agreed ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dripz1 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 5 Years I drew telling my self its graffiti and ive made more improvement in the last 6 months, simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 20min freestyle for the skwid battle that is going on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 That's dope! kind of lost the left side of the W with all the lines but can't wait to see some colour on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Not gonna colour it. Another quick freestyle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pest 2 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 that has some real potential i like it, and sheens stuff is real nice - keep at it man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRACER Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 paper chase. your quotation marks are hot though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 gems i like your stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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