E_B_A Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 That CHARLIE hollow was pretty nice. Wasn't there a VERY famous writer on the west coast writing CHARLIE though? I'll have to look at my book of freight graff when I get home. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendicott Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 yeah -- simples --- exactly like this ----- DRIPS ---- do that.. once you get nasty at those -- then start bending them.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dibbs17 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 how do these look? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 This one i did last summer too, what you think?[/size][/font] ... too messy i cant even read that ish yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Dibbs - getting there on the first one, letters are still different proportions tho. 2nd one just scrap it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
padre nuestro Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 hahaha toys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
padre nuestro Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Is that your awesome work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 hope not! cause tht shit is horribleworse than toy... like tonka toy! jeeeeeeeezeeee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 oh fa-sho dude your fucking sick that style... OMG *cums* your sooo original and good, get ya gring on gangsta Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 alts here ya go, im dissapointed that your is way better than mine, but oh well, ill get better. sneak ill have your for later or 2moro school sttuff: crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 I hope thats a joke thats some real toy shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 stop bumping it man your ruining the page!!! :D MY EYES!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 haha quick sketch from school, was planning on coloring but i dont like it so i aint gonna: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 spec the middle of the s is too skinny and the bottom of it too huge....the bottom part of the p shud be skinnier to match the curve of the p..the extension at the end the c is unnecessary....basically make the letter more uniform in width.. define the one below the alts that u posteed is the best...on that one..the arrows are horrible..just look at a bunch of peices to see how its done...the huge arrows are unnecessary because they are coming out of nowhere..the I is to plain compared to the rest of the letters...the N is the weakest letter in that one..i think it s the inner curve. drips those simples u posted are good..the first one tho has two different styles (the dr and teh ips) and teh second one would look much better without the arrow on the I... dibs...teh 1st one u posted is pretty good..the 3d is off...i dont like how the i and b are at an angle and intersect each other...and the upper curve of the B seems off to me..maybe make it a bigger curve.. that charlies pretty cool... keds..the lower right bar of the k would look better if it were skinnier such that it met up with the line coming down from the upper right bar..The e's weak..dunno wat to say abt it...and finally i dunno abt the curve of the d... the alts is cool...feel like the markers detract from it tho..would look better with other marker or maybe a diff color.... just trying to help out.,...if i forgot any1 who wants crits..just ask. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 how do these look? not saying a bite but reminds me of blade. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 alts here ya go, im dissapointed that your is way better than mine, but oh well, ill get better. sneak ill have your for later or 2moro school sttuff: crits? srry to bump my own stuff but can i get some crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 the 2nd Define is nice is sweet man don't like the I on the 1st one not sure on the extensions on the bottom of the Ds, but defintely getting better man thanks for the exchange too!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 but its soo awesome, dude must have been in the game for atleast 20 years Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AllYourOilAreBelongToUS Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Stay off the streets until you're at least decent. Back to the drawing board man. Start with the simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenCans Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 ALTS,.. Work on your 3d...its all over the place. make it all go one way instead of different ways on each letter, or make it all go to one vanishing point. . .just look at the 3d on other pieces Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 mate that wasn't me, that was an exchange that define did for me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 Stay off the streets until you're at least decent. Back to the drawing board man. Start with the simples. the whole thing is tht nigga was never at the drawin boards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 ALTS,.. Work on your 3d...its all over the place. make it all go one way instead of different ways on each letter, or make it all go to one vanishing point. . .just look at the 3d on other pieces Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 something new, as always crits welcome cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 no crits needed from me man! diggin yo shit ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 its tyte. just feel like the s is missing a top part..feelme? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 yea man that top part of the S is my downfall every damn time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 some girl at work complained that graf is too masculine and asked me to do something softer lol so did this, any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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