Hot Fun Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 First time poster, and I've been writing for about a month. I know I'm still a wicked toy... Anyone have some advice on how I can improve? Sorry for the blurry quality, all I have is a camera phone right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eysom Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 i need some practice and an audience so here it goes... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 whatever .... fucked the "t" up took out the arrows letter size is out of proportion.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renk_one Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 pretty toy I know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wisk1 Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 i cant even read that shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 trouserarrow - go simpler... weasel... then hands are looking good but I wouldn't add the ONER onto it. Your name is long enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 full of colour but no structure :( :( :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 i write RAS somtimes XD mostly bone tho Fuck you Fuckers I write Ras..you fucking idiot's ! welll.. i USED too.. HAHAHAHA.. As you know...its all a MITH ... hahaha... :cool: :confused: :) :lol: :eek: :rolleyes: :D also..i aint the king of graff.. but looking at the last few pages..and my experience on BS...the majority of peeps here need to go a lil simpler.. 9 Rider...i always like you stuff.. Bounce...you know your good.. Sector...go simple...those addons take up ALL the page..! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 i agree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Fuck you Fuckers I write Ras..you fucking idiot's ! welll.. i USED too.. HAHAHAHA.. As you know...its all a MITH ... hahaha... :cool: :confused: :) :lol: :eek: :rolleyes: :D also..i aint the king of graff.. but looking at the last few pages..and my experience on BS...the majority of peeps here need to go a lil simpler.. 9 Rider...i always like you stuff.. Bounce...you know your good.. Sector...go simple...those addons take up ALL the page..! RASone is what i useally write never just ras. but i write bone alot more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 sss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 done in shop class :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 B's dope...not feeling the line across the O.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Bone... the fill is nice but NO EXTENSIONS. Sorry... And the center line of your "E" - the round part that comes to a small point... it could be just me but I'd give that more definition. Make it a bit bigger. But I do like the fill a lot. And the letters aren't terrible. Just need work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 random character Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DewmLbk Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 First piece in about 5 months, can ya tell?....yeah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 letters are nice..lose the squiggules etc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 finished product to lazy to color Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 thats pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendoner Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 KRS wrecks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fube Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 fuckin around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 for the haters... MITH is the hardest dude onthis page. know about it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 some of my recent stuff. tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Bugs..... there's already a hero ES in pittsburgh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 ...Sorry I can't crit because I'm in a hurry, my friend just called me to skate. So I'll post this and run! Adios! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 finished product to lazy to color now thats fresh and simple i dig Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 ...Sorry I can't crit because I'm in a hurry, my friend just called me to skate. So I'll post this and run! Adios! knews you know i'm always feelin' the shit you put out.it's simple, it's straight pen, it's got good dimention, flows,the notches work for you, but that "e" seem's out of place in this. and it's too big. draws attention away from the rest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 alright you guys heres something completely unexpected from me.....another throw!! rough need to fix it a lil but w/e crits bugs take out all the background stuff and arrows nine that all looks cool Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ubertoy Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 am I on the right track? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my nine rides shotgun Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 PACE... yeah, you're starting simple, and thats something not alot of people do. some parts of your letters that shoudld have drop shadow don't. like on the bottom of the "c" where it kicks out, yer missing it there. and i wouldn't really sketch over them little trains. and tray makin them bigger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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