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im gonna give MS.rokkaz some help....

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on this one, self and pose need to work on your handstyle, im not really feeling those S's or L's, and your S and E dont flow with your your L or F. the solution to this, is to practice handstyle, write your name over and over and over and over, dont stop, personally, i wouldnt make my letters so round, but hey, it may be easier for you.

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on thise one, pose, youre on the right track, but theres always room for improvement. you need to work on your 3-d, you have the same problem on your S, and you need to work on that P do it in one stroke instead of 2

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on this one, good choice of color, but the green kills it.... you made your hole on the E too big, and all the squigglys around the letter... get rid of them, its a throwie, keep it as simple as possible.

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good shit, i like this one.

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you need to work on letter structure, i dont like this one.

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