JayFo Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 Well my other Jyse thread was filled with my older crap and I just felt like having only newer stuff in here and gettin criticism on it. So that's why I'm makin a new thread.... http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid104/p62486307275830954305f89c7174bc18/f99939b1.jpg'> I'll have more stuff soon but gotta scan. Any criticism is fine... just wanna see where I'm at with shit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phone Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 Nice work..cool style..keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 dope work...i like your style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drunken fool Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 im not feelin it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted March 8, 2004 Author Share Posted March 8, 2004 thanks to phone and why write and thats cool drunken, watcha not feelin tho? And to anyone else who likes it... what ya like or feelin? I dunno it just is good to know why someone does like somethin or doesn't so i can get an idea where I'm at and what to maybe work on or continue doin the same. Ya know..?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 i like the letter style... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted March 8, 2004 Share Posted March 8, 2004 Hmm. Hard to say really dude. From looks off the letters, you are higher experience than I am so noit much to say. I like the flow and style. Something about the extras and add ons tho. Some flow nice, some look afraid to flow. Almost like they are stiff. The thing I Think I see with your work is that all letters you do are straight edge. Ever thought about curves and bump flows. It gives the letter sometimes something fantastic to look at. Sorry if I couldn't help much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted March 8, 2004 Author Share Posted March 8, 2004 I get you man... I dunno ever since I started I've done a pretty good amount of stuff with straight letters, especially cuz I dunno I based everythin off just bars. Now I'm curvin some lines and stuff here and there as you can see... but the overall thing i do is straight edges i guess. I do want to do mroe than one style or whatever so as i progress more I'm gonna work on just straight up curvy flowing letters rather than the straighter ones and see what i come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
micro Posted March 9, 2004 Share Posted March 9, 2004 all i see is a red X :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted March 27, 2004 Author Share Posted March 27, 2004 same style and letters are way similar but no extra shit on this... any opinions criticism whatever is fine.... http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid109/p33ac6cb6deb56fe0aeeab3974f16e7f4/f93679b2.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted March 27, 2004 Share Posted March 27, 2004 Nice n simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drunken fool Posted March 27, 2004 Share Posted March 27, 2004 i just think the add ons are wack.. but overall it looks like you have nice letter structure.. just work on the add ons.. make them go somewheres Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOOTER_WON Posted March 27, 2004 Share Posted March 27, 2004 Originally posted by micro all i see is a red X :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuiK Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 im feelin it jyse...not so much the "E" cuz too many ppl bite off that look...rest is the shite though! DOPE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuiK Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 looks like my style..well almost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imation Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 Originally posted by micro all i see is a red X :( me too:mad: :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethreadzny2 Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 props, because you know the basic structures of letters very well. nice flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted March 29, 2004 Author Share Posted March 29, 2004 thanks to those who replied... and aobut my E well i hate E's lol. i don't hate em but its the most annoying letter to do deal with. S's are the most fun and i love em, Y's are cool too... J's or at least my J's are usually similar to my Y and I haven't really change my J up much, but they don't gimme trouble. My E's a pain and always have trouble getting em right... also i get annoyed about the space inbetween the top of the S and the top of the E. It's just akward to me lol. Anywayz... any other opininos are cool or criticism sayin what ya dont like or like and what i can improve. The thing about my E was helpful cuz i knwo now i gotta work more on it. I'm gonna start tryin to throw my letters to kick em in different directions... a messier look to my shit and just see where it heads me. Since this style i got goin now is alright and ill keep with it but i wanna try somethin a bit crazier. anywayz ive typed too mucha nd im mad tired, night people... peace.., 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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