stealthyxcougar

fuck i hope that guy's not serious

look at the earlier posts that are similar to yours. read the advice given to them. apply it to yourself

nek get those arrows out of there! and i'd oust the kick back on the bottom leg of the k and widen the e a little bit, other than that it's not too bad at all. the fill's pretty cool too

i'm aware, i was asking who was to the left of freak haha

who'se beside the freak and envys?

faaack! that lawst is nice!

is that a comeback or a confession?

awsk, the tags look ok, try building off of those instead of going in a completely different direction with your bubbly throw thing, i don't think you're ready to stray too far away from straights yet

red text for a red eye

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oh god that "hollow"... i think that's supposed to be a character of some sort right?

redeyed, i feel like you went all out on the e's and k, but kept it more simple on the k. i guess that's more a stylistic thing as opposed to a structure thing, your e's could've been a bit more consistent, however if you intended to make them different from each other then make them REALLY different. for the most part i don't think it's a particularly bad idea, i think you should work on it and tweak it a bit though. and i like that 2010

massgraff, it's fine if you don't like how i critique, no offense, but at least i don't say "dope" or "that's good" to everything that's posted here. i'm honest with my critiques, and that honesty helps people to grow and improve. isn't that the whole reason this thread is here?

But robot, you could spend some time studying spimples and letter structure as well...

NOOO, noridna don't listen to them, that's really bad. you may have been "piecing" for 2 years, but you should have been doing simples and getting basic letter structure down. you've got to learn the rules before you can successfully break them. your shading's fucked too. and robot chicken, it's an interesting idea, but i found it tough to find the letter structure in there, also don't know if you're aware, there's an aloha that's already pretty big.

exactly

reson it's all too dark, there's no contrast between the fill and the outline, better camera or not it'll still be difficult to read and see. even if we could see it we'd probably just tell you the same things we've told everyone else on here... use bars, go simpler, learn letter structure.

^ agreed, THINK SIMPLE! you've got to know the rules behind letter structure before you can successfully break them and do your own thing

person and spicey, your guesses are as good as mine, i ganked it from google

satanisreal, that looks really nice! second one especially

arin and neoh looking good

wow, that's a cool tag, sweet arrow... NAWT

bakte, read earlier pages on the thread. take the advice that was given to other people and apply it to yourself. that's all the crits you'll get from me

mos, stop posting. you clearly don't take and apply the advice that is given you over and over again. everyone on here has told you to DO SIMPLES, USE BARS AND WORK ON BASIC STRUCTURE! you're still doing the same things that you always have been. pay attention to the advice that's given you, and STUDY graffiti, don't just look at it. phony, i like that structure, i'd do a few less extensions though. just my opinion though