fuck me if you already know this and it was just a goof, but the thing with those type of r's, is that the little loop where the two legs meet has to line up with the part of the right leg thats kicking out, or else it looks weird. and take the hump things off the tops of the e and s, because it doesnt really make sense. you dont write regular e's and s's with spines, do you? lose the curl up on the leg of the m too. look at other peoples m's to get an idea for a better one.