I can see what you are attempting, keep practising. Try thinking of some of the extensions as additional bars to the letters and some more finer ones to connect. I would lose the real curved style in the extensions and make them more jaggedy and sharp, almost like they are mimicking the choppiness of the letter E and work how they will flow into the next letter. If the letter is to sit alone then don't have the extensions frame it, use it as a chance for the letter to be exploding out almost
Shaken, try working out how that connection is gonna move onto the K, it flows from the S to the N then just stops would have looked good flowing through the whole thing, maybe try and make the other letters have a lettle more flow to them rather than kinda sitting upright, but dope nonetheless.
Rait - do some straight letters, don't make them real curvy and don't make the letters so high when they are so narrow, try and make it a bit beefier.
Zid - I think the A is far too big and chunky in comparison to the other letters, I would have preferred them to be more uniform rather than slopping up to the middle and back down, that looks cool in a 3D style but in those letters it looks a bit weird proportionally for me.
damn an essay for a crit, at least I didn't say go simple haha