im not telling you to bite vare, bute look in the "raels" thread in brickslayers... take it and run... astra, your hands are alright... but you need to work on those letters abit... maybe you should try some simple more block type letters as well, i always tell kids, look at the fonts on cereal boxs... you can get some good idea... or childrens books... elios, you have the rite idea, your letters are just a lil bit unpproportionate, try balancing out your letter sizea (especially the "e" and the "o"..... peace....................