ur y s and t stand out for me..over all it looks reall tight
feel like ur zs the weakest of ur letters..jsut a suggestion..maybe try making it a mirror image of ur s.
dang decy..ill say it again the styles ridiculously tight and so are teh colors..lol i need to get some motivation just to finish this one page ive been working on..
considering ur new to this.im mad jealous.. teh first one is dope...mayeb make the rs lower leg strecth out more as it kinda looks like a b...but keep doing wat ur doiing. and the 2nd styles dope 2.