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wack but worked on

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by gimpos, Oct 20, 2002.

  1. gimpos

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    wack but worked on

    Discussion started by gimpos - Oct 20, 2002

    yo i know my shit is pretty wack and it needs to be developed a whole lot more but heres some of my recent shit an just wondering what u think...

    http://www.design-eye.co.uk/blackandwhite.jpg'>

    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/horseshoes.jpg'>

    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/ilean.jpg'>
    this one was done real quick, i hate the colours but hey, i was just experimenting...

    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/smallhandstyle.jpg'>

    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/spraycanman.jpg'>

    peace
     
  2. Flat

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    Flat - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    Atleast your trying to stay simple, just keep working on it :D

    I kinda like hte last one.. If you get rid of the character and bunch the letters up a bit more, and put a nicer fill in it wouldnt be too bad.
     
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  3. rymewon

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    rymewon - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    make your 3d on ur letters a little wider and see what that does for ya... stay simple. u have to learn the basics first.... and ur off to a good start.
     
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    TresOne - Replied Oct 20, 2002

     
  5. gimpos

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    gimpos - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    keeping it comming

    http://www.design-eye.co.uk/basic.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/cracked.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/flight.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/littleone.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.design-eye.co.uk/starloop.jpg'>

    more quickes tips comments criticizm please
     
  6. Wind

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    Wind - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    the third to last one isnt to bad:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
     
  7. Dare

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    Dare - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    ^ agree about 3rd to last one, although I think it would look better if it was less spindly in parts (u know, less thin and weak looking). But I think its OK. As for the rest, keep working.
     
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    DorkstaR - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    i like the top 3 on your 2nd post...the ones that are in black and white. so like everyone said....its good youre keeping it simple and to the basics cus thats where we all came from. but damn....i was thinking about starting to write gimp instead of dork like a month ago. oh well back to the drawing board. youre stuff isnt wack man. nice stuff, keep posting.
     
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  9. BluntedMonky

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    BluntedMonky - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    GIMPOS!!!!1

    wat a gay name......maybe you should focus on a new name first sometin simple and short......the sketches i dont like
     
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    sept7 - Replied Oct 20, 2002

    Nice work. Keep it simple to start with, and I'd have to say you've improved from your first post. Personally when I started I didn't even work on fills or anything like that untill I got the lettering down... Just a suggestion. Nice work bro -sept7

    Ps. I like the top 2 on your 2nd post.
     
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    Good thing you are staying simple in most of those..... You have an interesting name....
     
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    Re: keeping it comming

     
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    gimpos - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    yo i think the name gimpos is dope and thats what my boys have called me for years cheers for the comments guys, i'll be posting some more up soon if anyones interested... and uh yah angels 4 world series!
     
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    Re: keeping it comming

    http://www.design-eye.co.uk/flight.jpg'>

    i like this alot
     
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