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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by madcyantist, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. madcyantist

    madcyantist New Jack

    Joined: Jul 3, 2003 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    jus started writin plz tell me what u think and how i could improve...

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  2. JayFo

    JayFo Member

    Joined: Jan 1, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    The way you connected the letters together made the letters look worse than they are cuz it's just not readable, i just see the S and Y at the end and a few other letters, but can't really make it out. I see FAM something ASY so guessin it's fantasy, I just don't like the way you put ya letters topether....
     
  3. supercooey

    supercooey Junior Member

    Joined: Mar 4, 2003 Messages: 156 Likes Received: 0
    first thing i would say is learn how to draw your straight plain and simple letters better.. but when i look closer...
    i like the way you drew out those letters. they have definite distinction.. however, you ruined that by joining them at INSANELY silly points of view.. and your 3d is amazingly off.. i suggest you draw those letters out again, space em out (dont join them), and work out a vanishing point to draw your "3d" from.. seriously, you have the right ideas, you just mishmash them all into one crazy pile..
    try that.. and if you dont know about vanishing points.. school yourself.. either here or with the help of google... ..for real, it is worth it, TRUST ME. it will make your shit look 100% better"ly" executed, if you knowmesayin.


    anyways, id like to see more of your shit, and dont take what half the kids up on here have to say seriously, everyone here hates for the sake of hating.


    never stop and peasout,
    cooaizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZ.
     
  4. madcyantist

    madcyantist New Jack

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    yup it says fantasy....thanx mate for that..
     
  5. supercooey

    supercooey Junior Member

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    ps: might i add on third and fourth inspection, i am really feeling that 'y'... had it not been connected to all that other mess.

    post that shit up all straight and proper and you BY DEFAULT burn half the kids up in here.

    peas.
     
  6. madcyantist

    madcyantist New Jack

    Joined: Jul 3, 2003 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    i'll post up my letters soon jus them on their own..thanx peepz for tha advice
     
  7. joseph879@ms

    [email protected] Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 21, 2003 Messages: 242 Likes Received: 0
  8. supercooey

    supercooey Junior Member

    Joined: Mar 4, 2003 Messages: 156 Likes Received: 0
    to start? word.
    but i wanna see some 3d'ed out letters from this guy too..
    i know he can do it... peasout.
     
  9. BloodKlot

    BloodKlot Senior Member

    Joined: Jun 29, 2000 Messages: 1,426 Likes Received: 0
    Keep it simple. Make em sharp
     
  10. madcyantist

    madcyantist New Jack

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  11. xwibxonex

    xwibxonex New Jack

    Joined: Feb 18, 2002 Messages: 3 Likes Received: 1
    your basic bending of the letters aint too bad at all , but man fuck all the blobs and notches, those aren't needed, work on those and where to put them later, dont just put them there for no reason. you'll develop where to put those and make them balance later, start simpler.
     
  12. dork

    dork Member

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  13. mogilny

    mogilny Senior Member

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    to much just can kill it....stay simple.....
     
  14. parcheesey

    parcheesey New Jack

    Joined: Nov 11, 2002 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 1
    the end of ur 3d isnt right on the first one
     
  15. TrustUGN

    TrustUGN Member

    Joined: Oct 15, 2001 Messages: 362 Likes Received: 0
    quote:
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    Originally posted by Fryre Dekoy
    your basic bending of the letters aint too bad at all , but man fuck all the blobs and notches, those aren't needed, work on those and where to put them later, dont just put them there for no reason. you'll develop where to put those and make them balance later, start simpler.
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    yeah... I would definately have to agree. Stick with bending the letters how you have been. Along with the notches and bumps... try and take it easy on your lines. They go past the spot they should connect to waay too much.
     
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