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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by madcyantist, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. madcyantist

    madcyantist New Jack

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    sketch

    Discussion started by madcyantist - Jul 3, 2003

    jus started writin plz tell me what u think and how i could improve...

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  2. JayFo

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    JayFo - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    The way you connected the letters together made the letters look worse than they are cuz it's just not readable, i just see the S and Y at the end and a few other letters, but can't really make it out. I see FAM something ASY so guessin it's fantasy, I just don't like the way you put ya letters topether....
     
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  3. supercooey

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    supercooey - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    first thing i would say is learn how to draw your straight plain and simple letters better.. but when i look closer...
    i like the way you drew out those letters. they have definite distinction.. however, you ruined that by joining them at INSANELY silly points of view.. and your 3d is amazingly off.. i suggest you draw those letters out again, space em out (dont join them), and work out a vanishing point to draw your "3d" from.. seriously, you have the right ideas, you just mishmash them all into one crazy pile..
    try that.. and if you dont know about vanishing points.. school yourself.. either here or with the help of google... ..for real, it is worth it, TRUST ME. it will make your shit look 100% better"ly" executed, if you knowmesayin.


    anyways, id like to see more of your shit, and dont take what half the kids up on here have to say seriously, everyone here hates for the sake of hating.


    never stop and peasout,
    cooaizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZ.
     
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  4. madcyantist

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    madcyantist - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    yup it says fantasy....thanx mate for that..
     
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  5. supercooey

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    supercooey - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    ps: might i add on third and fourth inspection, i am really feeling that 'y'... had it not been connected to all that other mess.

    post that shit up all straight and proper and you BY DEFAULT burn half the kids up in here.

    peas.
     
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  6. madcyantist

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    madcyantist - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    i'll post up my letters soon jus them on their own..thanx peepz for tha advice
     
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    1 POINT PERSPECTIVE
     
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  8. supercooey

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    supercooey - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    to start? word.
    but i wanna see some 3d'ed out letters from this guy too..
    i know he can do it... peasout.
     
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  9. BloodKlot

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    Keep it simple. Make em sharp
     
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  10. madcyantist

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    madcyantist - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    some letters...

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    xwibxonex - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    your basic bending of the letters aint too bad at all , but man fuck all the blobs and notches, those aren't needed, work on those and where to put them later, dont just put them there for no reason. you'll develop where to put those and make them balance later, start simpler.
     
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    :rolleyes:
     
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    to much just can kill it....stay simple.....
     
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    parcheesey - Replied Jul 3, 2003

    the end of ur 3d isnt right on the first one
     
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  15. TrustUGN

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    TrustUGN - Replied Jul 5, 2003

    quote:
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    Originally posted by Fryre Dekoy
    your basic bending of the letters aint too bad at all , but man fuck all the blobs and notches, those aren't needed, work on those and where to put them later, dont just put them there for no reason. you'll develop where to put those and make them balance later, start simpler.
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    yeah... I would definately have to agree. Stick with bending the letters how you have been. Along with the notches and bumps... try and take it easy on your lines. They go past the spot they should connect to waay too much.
     
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