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SHORT STORIES!

Discussion in 'Channel Zero' started by -sudz-, Jul 2, 2002.

  1. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    yes, well. i jave come to the conclusion that i like to write short stories. not the regular fairy tail kind. but whatever. here's one i wrote today:

    so there i was, sitting at the doctors office, with a ziploc bag full of vomit, and blood, but mostly vomit. i came to aquire this bag the night before while eating a brick of extra old cheddar. it wasnt even my vomit, or blood for that matter. but i was feeling sick abd just couldnt allow myself to leave the bag by its self. i mean it could get bored and i have come to like my new-found friend.

    i also have one on the net, with PICTURES and everything.

    i think you're yuckie.
     
  2. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    oh yeah, the one on the link is a bit longer, but from what my friends have said about it, i think it'll be worth the read. and i mean, it you et bored of that, theres pictures.
     
  3. THEdude

    THEdude Guest

    wow

    how long did it take you to do all that?

    you know with the pictures and everything.
     
  4. Devilush

    Devilush 12oz Legend

    Joined: Feb 1, 2001 Messages: 17,035 Likes Received: 2
    hmph..you're on msn.
     
  5. DEE38

    DEE38 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Apr 8, 2001 Messages: 11,128 Likes Received: 13
    i want more! this is great...

    more please.
     
  6. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    soon dee, soon.

    dlush: i'm on you're msn list? WHAT??????????
     
  7. REGULATOR

    REGULATOR Elite Member

    Joined: Sep 6, 2001 Messages: 3,383 Likes Received: 0
    ahahhahahhahahaahahahahhah these stories are fuckin hillarious...hahahahaha you stupid little 12 year old!! ahahahha jp man nice work...this is my kinda humor
     
  8. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    but i'm 14......
     
  9. platapie

    platapie Guest

    14 years wise my freind.
     
  10. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    please reply to my thread. it gives meaning to my otherwise meaningless life.
     
  11. xdyingfetusx

    xdyingfetusx New Jack

    Joined: Apr 24, 2002 Messages: 72 Likes Received: 0
    yes yes

    I think I'm in love


    from André
     
  12. SPLINTER

    SPLINTER Guest

    i too share youre love for short stories but for sum unknown reason my short stories arent very short.

    anyways, you rule. keep eating that jello and drinking nestle quick.
     
  13. CIPHER_one

    CIPHER_one Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 3, 2000 Messages: 2,300 Likes Received: 0
    It's pretty redundant and the story is just kind of bland. There is no real plot or anything of interest.

    I realize you weren't try to break ground with this story, but try to write something with substance and meaning. or write stuff that makes you happy, either way..

    good job on actually writing though, no one does it anymore. or too many people do it. I can't remember.
     
  14. Stapler

    Stapler Guest

    The story sucks ass but i gets you thinking. It inspired me to write a story to but then i realised i cant be fucked. Funny pictures though.........
     
  15. Canadiano

    Canadiano Guest

    you're some kid from some crew uptown.. I think.
     
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