WaddaWadda Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 keep that shit simple, straw. looks like when you tried some funky shit, areas get cluttered and structure gets lost. think basic and build off of that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 repeat for that chron jam... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black hoodie Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 i'd like some honest criticism. if it's going somewhere, lemme know which direction. if it's wack, tell me, but also tell me why. need better letters before all the connections and bends... characters are cool though.. just needs to be drawn more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heydontlookdownthere Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 Strawman, just go simple homie. Work on keeping your lines clean and even. And remember GARY BUSEY! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strawman Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 right. simplicity. i appreciate the advice. not too much of a writer, i myself, characeters are more my jam. i'll keep scripting. thanks for the straightforward words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Major Tom Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 HAHAHA^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Major Tom Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 i really appreciate that, man. good deal. perhaps i can do one for you? pretty clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oreshatesyou Posted May 7, 2010 Share Posted May 7, 2010 Can't wait to see bigmack's sketches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DIEMS Posted May 8, 2010 Share Posted May 8, 2010 got lazy so I used photoshop for colors,,I don't care XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Scapegoat! Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 mek throws. bottom left/top right/philly style's are sick 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MILWAUKEES BEST Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 come on NC. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Share Posted May 11, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
face3face3 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 shit thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 need to work on proportions and cleanliness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Back to the future Posted May 13, 2010 Share Posted May 13, 2010 katelin, nice really clean homie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 14, 2010 Share Posted May 14, 2010 nah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 14, 2010 Author Share Posted May 14, 2010 thanks backtothefuture. it could deff use some work, just thought ide post it. 'Yah' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted May 14, 2010 Share Posted May 14, 2010 and too many little hearts...if your going down that avenue, just do bigger ones tucked behind the letters in more strategic areas. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 14, 2010 Author Share Posted May 14, 2010 thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeeO336 Posted May 14, 2010 Share Posted May 14, 2010 ITS A LITTLE OLD..... BUT I STILL LIKE IT... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EastHastings Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 ..wat. what is that last letter? O? T? Helicopter? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 15, 2010 Author Share Posted May 15, 2010 tattoo design for a friend Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EastHastings Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 i actually like that shaken. good job man. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoomeRangBanger Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 That's seconded, this is the strongest piece I've seen you do, it feels like you've found a solid ground with this one. You might want to emphasize the "G"ness of the large G though, make sure it can't be confused with a funky C. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeeO336 Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 OH AND TATS A O... HELICOPTER HA HA HA.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 15, 2010 Author Share Posted May 15, 2010 thanks alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted May 20, 2010 Share Posted May 20, 2010 if only i had my camera cord... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Back to the future Posted May 21, 2010 Share Posted May 21, 2010 i met this guy the other day. ^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 drop some pot and smoke some acid. :scrambled: hahaha, look at dude's tampon level now on the original post! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whiteoutpens Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 :lol: bump this:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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