life WDS Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 nice freak, heres a verbs simp.. i hate the fill but w/e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Bump for more crits, dont be afraid to hurt my feelings. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 do keyboard letters simples^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Freak, those are looking tight! I like the 2nd one down on the left hand side!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 a sticker sketch from today any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Damn, i thought that one was good.. whats the point in doing simple ass letters...no style to it... Thanks for the feedback though... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpiC_EsB Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 second is beast alts....good shit...i dont like the fill on the first one though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Damn, i thought that one was good.. whats the point in doing simple ass letters...no style to it... Thanks for the feedback though... because doing simples will give you an understanding of letter structure, then once you understand letter structure you know how to break letters down into their component parts and then you can mess with letter structure Simples are good for practising fills n stuff and once you can knock simples out real quick think of the knock on effect for your painting skills, the letters come as second nature so you can focus on can control etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaKoS OnEr Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 the top one is dope freak Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antere07 Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 feedback please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 thats nice man where the bottom curve of the B meets the upright is a bit fucked up but overall looks good, maybe if your gonna curve the top section of your T maybe curve the top section of the A, but thats just my personal opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antere07 Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 ok cool and yeah i dont like the bottom of the b any way just seeing what people thought XD cheers tho and i agree with the T & A Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 trying to develop chars, any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 dope shit freak and alts!! i dont like that A antere...looks wierd, maybe if the top of the A was like the top of the E..just my 2 cents did these wit the advice that was given dont really like the top one, especially the K any better?? can i get some crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 that character is looking alts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 I do like the 2 bottom ones, on each page, only thing I can think of is where u have the S and E joining at the bottom it kind unbalances the piece as the R and K don't have the connection or depth that the S and E have. I would keep the connection, thin it out a little and work a way the R and K can do something similar as it is the R is kind of joining the E and the K looks stuck on the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 thanks i was think that also about the s e connetion im having a hard time trying figure out how to connect the r and k tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Damn, i thought that one was good.. whats the point in doing simple ass letters...no style to it... Thanks for the feedback though... wowwwwwwwww whats the point of simples? wooowww man just wow. simples have no style? ahahlmaoroflllssszz!!!!1 WOOOOOOOOOWWWWW my man you need to really rethink whatever basic concept you have of style and graffiti in general man. simple ass letter with "no style" are the basis of any more complex style. To ignore the fact that simples are the very crux of graff, style, skill, structure etc. is laughably ignorant besides that though its good that your not on some ARRROWWWZZZ, EXT3NTIONNZZZZZZ OMGZZZZ shit. that style is decent and your definatly not hopeless, but simpler would be better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 as I haven't posted any of my throws I thought I would, here are 2: and a sketch on a sticker: crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 wowwwwwwwww whats the point of simples? wooowww man just wow. simples have no style? ahahlmaoroflllssszz!!!!1 WOOOOOOOOOWWWWW my man you need to really rethink whatever basic concept you have of style and graffiti in general man. simple ass letter with "no style" are the basis of any more complex style. To ignore the fact that simples are the very crux of graff, style, skill, structure etc. is laughably ignorant the truth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 alts on the throw the t looks like a lower case r i dont like the middle one i like that sticker Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 yea I know what you mean about the T on the 1st one it has been doing my head in. I have tried dropping the circle bit off the extension but that doesn't help i think i have to slim down curve on the L and make both extensions of the T visible or go lower case T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 yo alts mayb try something like this: New sticker from 2day: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 a sticker sketch from today any crits? bump for some crits, especially colours!!! I'm stumped as to what to do and yea I like the throw Jack so might try and do something like that maybe on your SPEC throw fill the centre of the P there is just something about that particular letter I don't like, everything else is dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 simples, om stickers some more characters, again just stickers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 im loving those alts stickers!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 dam alts thats some good shit. thats inspiring me to do buttloads of stickers haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 this is what i'm saying, practise your shit on stickers make you try that litle harder as you know it will be in public domain, and it isn't as boring as just doing them in a book as you know your gettin your name out there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 yea true, but sometimes u need the bigger space in the blackbook. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 this is the TOY thread we should be posting adive not beefing or saying shit is wack. Of course shit can be wack its hte TOY forum lets just be helpful cos everywhere else you will get shot down quicker than a black man in mississipi (never could spell it) Beef elsewhere lets keep this shit helpful, the internet has taken away older writers taking younger ones under their arms so its down to decent painters to teach the ropes through this un-personal method Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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