This is my Username Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 i would drop the arrows, work on the s and the k and just practise, that one looks very stiff /nh like it doesn't have any flow to it, but just practise practise Alright, thanks. And, awww...I liked the s...I thought it was the best part. Yeah, the arrows I sorta threw in there for flavor...now that you mention it, I guess it's the wrong flavor, haha. I'll work on those things, man. Thanks. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 because most of them quit and dont take it serious. and they take names of kings and think there shit is cool. and they really dont know why they are doing it. TroubleOnYourSytem=TOYS ima toy and i understand why i do graff i take it serously and i dont take names of a king and i know my shit is wackthats why im on here every day to get better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 first. whoever painted that. dont paint. do keyboard lettrs for a while. learn your shit. same to you smirk, you have a much better understanding of structure, but when it comes down it. you still need work. drop the connection from the s to m. make the leg of th k like the leg of the r. drop all extentions. and make the dot on the i th same width as the rest of the letter. keep your widths all the same, and use bars. also. bump yeah. haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 dose your throwie say remove? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yup. the v is hella outta place Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yesio, please dont bump your own shit on the same page. alts, fire man. fire. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 oh well i like it becides the M and V Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bend Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 alts, awesome sketches Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 ima toy and i understand why i do graff i take it serously and i dont take names of a king and i know my shit is wackthats why im on here every day to get better getting on here everyday isnt going to make you better. it will make you bite other peoples shit from seeing it so much. get out there and paint. but not too much, dont toy up your city *cough* LAST from rva *cough* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 well yea it will cause one i dont bite and if i keep getting help like i am now then i will get good at this simple shit and i can move on from there to more harded stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yo driver. i give credit to this thread for getting better. i drew bout everyday and posted it, then just naturaly got better from the help and crits. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yo driver. i give credit to this thread for getting better. i drew bout everyday and posted it, then just naturaly got better from the help and crits. thanks for proveing my point Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yeah. haha no crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KNS13 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 fix the M make it look moer bubbley 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 yo driver. i give credit to this thread for getting better. i drew bout everyday and posted it, then just naturaly got better from the help and crits. true, but anybody can say "simples". would you rather see this kid sketch all day and post his shit on the internet or get out on the street and live it with other writers? im just saying, writers need to stop relying on 12oz so much and just get out there. and its one thing to post some shit to show other writers, but using it constantly for crit is another. KNS, do your own thing. keep writing for a while and your style WILL come. and dont give a damn if someone doesnt like it, keep working it. eh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 tru tru ^^ yesio, we dont need to see that shit 3 times. DAMN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 tru tru ^^ yesio, we dont need to see that shit 3 times. DAMN I know, right?! Thanks for the tips, guys. I'll remember them when I sketch later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 listen, username and KNS, i was pretty hostile. but post every other other other sketch so there is aleast slight individual improvement and development. ya feel me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 maybe give me some damn crits and ill stop bumping it. hard concept? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 crits? 1- stop byting. your first screams out bite. chomp chomp your throw is all over the place. do what EVERYONE tell you kid, simples. keyboard letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 crits? 1- stop byting. your first screams out bite. chomp chomp your throw is all over the place. do what EVERYONE tell you kid, simples. keyboard letters. I didn't want to be the one to say it...but this is all true. And yeah, I gotcha Driver. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 ok. so because i come up with a style thats different than the average. im biting? tell me who i bit off of then. ask kns. he saw my rough drafts of this style. i didnt bite from fucking anyone. suck a dick. i didnt bite shit. and in the past few months, your the first person to tell me to do keyboard letters. people wayyy iller than you have been tellin me im on the right path. so im just gonna ignore that little comment. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 ok. so because i come up with a style thats different than the average. im biting? tell me who i bit off of then. ask kns. he saw my rough drafts of this style. i didnt bite from fucking anyone. suck a dick. i didnt bite shit. and in the past few months, your the first person to tell me to do keyboard letters. people wayyy iller than you have been tellin me im on the right path. so im just gonna ignore that little comment. ;) Go for it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 :lol: :lol: :lol: name one person that says your on the right track thats "iller" you cant. you fail. :eek: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 ....go for what? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 soyel. elegal/siamo. meniks. haptik. more. just dont feel like going on. so...i think that means you fail;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 ....go for what? Go for heading down the wrong path. We're trying to HELP you. Majority rules, bro. If only a few "iller" writers told you your on the right path, then they were fucking with your head. We're all toys here...that's why we're in this thread (with the exception of a few who are here to help us toys). Listen to our advice or don't post here. It just gets annoying when you try to help someone who ASKS for criticisms and they flip out on you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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shaken20 Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 never heard of any of them. they live near you? they your boys? lol. i bet they are toy aswell. just do simples man. take the crits. your just some kid, who bites shit, and pretends hes up there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 i honestly take crits just fine. just not when im being accused of biting. thats what set me off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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