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..::recent sketches::..

 

these are some of the sketches i did last month. good or bad? i think they're kind of toy, but i just need some opinions. thanks.

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_1'>

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_2'>

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_4'>

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_6'>

I will post some more if yall think they're alright.

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i suggest u lose the "stick style" and find a style that flows. not only is it more appealing but it will benefit u to find a style u can stick with. work on simples more than anything. half ur letters dont really look like im sure they are suppose to.

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i dont really like it.. its just simple with a little bit of bending and ugly arrows.. write through your imagination, not through what you think people will like, ay?:lick:

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http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000030.jpg'>

 

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000032.jpg'>

 

*These aren't throwies but they're nice. I think you should either stick with this "style" or just stick what you think is right. But if you chose to continue to achieve that "right style", I suggest getting a good letter structure.

 

 

Your lettesr aren't terrible [i'm talking about your simples] but your letters don't match. The only reason they don't match, is because some bars [or just the letter itself] aren't all the same in size. You're probably thinking "So, so-and-so letter's are different sizes and their letters lood good". True but they're experienced with basic letter structure. To make a long story short, don't rush your stuff. Don't attempt a wildstyle yet.

 

 

That goes for you, me, and any other toy. I don't do "wildstyle" myself because I find it difficult. I haven't really found my "style" yet. Plus, I always want my letters to be "readable". If someone passes by one of my pieces on a wall, I want them to be like "Damn, this MELK kid is nice" NOT "Damn, this toy is garbage. Imma paint over his shit". I think you should always have a piece that you'll be able to paint with ease. But as the moths/years go on, you can do whatever you want.

 

 

Stay up

MELK

 

P.S - You gotta decide on whether you want to write FATE or FAIT. I bet "FATE" is takin' already though.

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Thanks starz. I was just messing around with that one but here's another one for you if you liked it.

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000042.jpg'>

And i understand what you're saying Melk. I did start out with pieces and i should have worked my way up to pieces, but thats why i've started practicing simples and i hope to improve more before putting anything else on a wall. Thanks for the tips.

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Oh yeah MELK i write FAIT, fate is already taken. There's a Fate in LA so i'm writing FAIT. My name is Fate2*88 because i signed up for this forum before i changed my name and didnt want to re-register.

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I am noone to be speaking but I think you should stick with that style I like it..in about 5 months your shit is gonna be h-o-t-t,it's iight now but if you keep with it and improve your bad points..I think you get what i'm saying..iight i'm done..goodnight.

 

-Noumerunoskionerola

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Both..fuck it throw them both together if you can..

A wise man once told me "Don't listen to me listen to you"..You know who you are..::Coughheczcough::

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