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OsCaR306

trying to improve..

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something i did late last nite..

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174900&index=0&key='>

 

something i did fast the other day

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...01&index=0&key=

 

today...

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...03&index=0&key=

 

today also...

http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...02&index=0&key=

 

 

i dont have mad skills and im still improving but to improve i think u need criticism...most of u r guna be dicks anyway tho, and u dont knjow the first thing about writing...but..yea..

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IM NOT A DICK!!!

 

UMM yeah its maddd late im high as hell... bout to go to bed and shit... I'll give you some criticism with out being a dick here it goes umm so yeah my personal opinion is that the coloring is cool and shit but you gotta put alittle more work into straiting out the letters for example make them more even , try rounding them out and maybe work with more simple styles. The first piece i like the character on the bottom of the page the coloring was cool too. Just yeah, make the letters more simple and then post some more.

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as much as you say "everyone that disses on me is a toy"....its not always true. you need a LOT of work on your letter structure. it looks exactly like the shit i was drawing after writing for a few months. i hope you are a new writer. this was my attempt at not coming off as an asshole but im sure it didn't work.

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yeah im a new writer..3 or 4 months.. and all i was saying is alot of the people that diss on the board do really suck..i didnt say everyone...but alot..

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well?

 

i dont know if its just me but were did you get that toon face thing at the bottom of the 1st link? i rember.. some one posting that same guy on 12.. but it seemed alot better? who knows.. just as sad as it is chill out on the wavy lines.. keep it simple.. like the e and tje purple one the center line is all waked out? keep it kinda normal good luck!

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Guest krie

nice , i feel if u keep at it, ull improve alot. peace

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Re: well?

 

Originally posted by ~DeNtOnE~

i dont know if its just me but were did you get that toon face thing at the bottom of the 1st link? i rember.. some one posting that same guy on 12.. but it seemed alot better? who knows.. just as sad as it is chill out on the wavy lines.. keep it simple.. like the e and tje purple one the center line is all waked out? keep it kinda normal good luck!

 

Bam bam-

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00213577f00000035.jpg'>

 

I understand that your learning, but biting that hard isnt cool.

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Stay in school, it's spelt "heist" not "hiest"...thought i'd let you know, unless that's on purpose and you want to make it look like you can't spell for shit...

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Guest rEaL 1NA

......maybe you should try to use simpler letters without so much going on so you can get your form tighter....looks like you have the right idea but you just need practice.....this shit takes dedication.....look at zesto's "summer school" thread for some tips....stay up......:scramble:

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Re: Re: well?

 

Originally posted by TheGlow

 

 

 

I understand that you're learning, but biting that hard isn't cool.

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this fool ain't good enough to bite yet. i was drawing that exact character a grip ago, its just a generic piece of shit character that you can experiment with.

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ive seen that char done so many times...obviously the person who posted b4 bited it...so dont shit on me b4 u shit on him. and i know, i purpopsely spell heist like that... plus there was a writer who wrote heist, so..

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Originally posted by OsCaR306

...obviously the person who posted b4 bited it...

*bit (it)

 

to dont shit on me b4 u shit on him.

*so (don't)

 

and i know i purpopsely spell heist like that...

*purposely spelled ("heist")

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Guest Media OEC

Look a lot of people probably make fun of you, but I;m like them, thats just ,mean........on the other hand you should just kill yourself because you will never have any talent.

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Guest uncle-boy

Re: Re: well?

 

Originally posted by TheGlow

 

Bam bam-

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00213577f00000035.jpg'>

 

I understand that your learning, but biting that hard isnt cool.

 

i've seen characters like this a thousand times the one above isnt original and neither is the one on the top of the thread. but who the fuck really cares anyways, he's just practicing in a darn sketch book. and they both suck.;)

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experiment with different shit and try and find yourself a style that you can work out and improve, and yeah they might as well name that little character Bill or soemthing cuz i see him alot. "Aw shit there's bill again". i'm high pay no attention to me:scramble:

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Guest melt

yeah, ive seen that character a lot. just keep your letters simple for now, it'll pay off later.

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Guest tears*uno

i like the coloring not the letters, work on the letter forms

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Guest Stoney Blaze
Originally posted by OsCaR306

 

woah..so i dont have proper grammer...

 

 

[grammar]:dazed:

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like everyone here has said or is thinking

PRACTICE with way more simple letters....learn the letter structure that way and it wont look so ...like ya tried too hard...some 2 cents for ya

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