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Thanks for the feedback guys, will give my hands a bit of TLC, fill some pages and such.

it bothers me that i cant rock a stylish simple... Let me know what y'all think.

Your welcome lol, in reality im mostly just lazy XD The S thickness is def off and ye you do need to go a little simpler, also bring that O out from behind the R a bit. practice practice!

kk, im on it.

ye sure dude, what you writin these days?

The Y and O feel cramped :/ also my shadow is off in places... fuckin simples lol

massive respect for rippin me a new one spawn lol. Wanna get my foundations on absolute lock so i have no excuse for shit letters in the future. Whole crit was proper, gonna work it out.

thx for the tips dude. I find them so fuckin difficult for some reason, my mind doesnt work that way lol. Keep practicin i guess.

gonna have to be KWG

On a simples kick.

Tryin to improve. Pointers welcome.

Crits on my quick simple? Like, makin sure my foundations are correct. Be harsh.

Really feelin LABS recent posts, PERTS is always on top of it too.

Thx i think dareist lol. My letter style isnt exactly traditional, maybe its that, im no style guru so maybe when i got my shit down on lock a bit more u might start feeling it. ZOMB: theyre really opaque for the most part, some of the lighter colours will need a second coat tho if ure going over spraypaint. White highlights mos def need 2 coats to pop.

scroll up ^^^

I use Molotow 227 markers. Theyre good acrylic paint pens but no good if you wanna blend.

thx peeps, fairly pleased with this one :D

Also, i tweaked and coloured this. All crits 'preciated.

Separate your letters a little more dude, the O and M are getting lost and they are half the size of ure Z and B. The thickness of ure B is inconsistent too, makes it look sloppy.

LOL. next word: MINT Due Thursday!

I like that Y man, nice stuff!

I vote spawn becos im going to bite on that Y shape a little lol!

I thought the exact same thing tbh. Any ideas on a remedy? I like the shape but it does indeed look too much like an E.

LOL. I dunno, thinkin the cloud around it pink but other than that was gonna wing it. Any more crits? like, any changes?

The cut ins on both K's are whack and there is generally no consistency. Your letters are all different sizes (which is fine if you got some time under your belt and you know what ure doing but...) Ure 3D is off and ure hand needs some patience. Go simple, as in matching letter bars and overall letter widths and heights. Make ure letters beautiful. Do you think they are?