asote, i dig that shit! Props to you!
if I was to crit anything, it would be the middle part of the E, maybe fatten it up.
That being said, I think it fits the piece well.
Phere, thank you for making the P and R connected, that looks so much better!
Teetas is right though, tone down the serifs a little bit. Keep some, but don't overdo it.
If you overfertalize a plant, it will wilt and die.