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here it is

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by LOReSeVeNTeN, Jun 30, 2003.

  1. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    ok i finally think i can post pics so heres what i got judge me...
    keep in mind some of them are really old
    http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400193837_005P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353318_003P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353318_006P.jpg'> [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_004P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_005P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_006P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_007P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_008P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_009P.jpg'>
    [img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_010P.jpg'>
     
  2. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    shit i posted them and then i viewed the post several times and the pics were up... and now like half an hour later they are not there anymore can anyone help me
    this shit is getting really annoying
     
  3. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    i might have gotten it

    again i guess
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000022.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000023.jpg'> [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000024.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000021.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000019.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000018.jpg'>
    this one in sharpies
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000011.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000008.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000005.jpg'>
    this one is really old like my first painting mostly acrilic alittle black sharpie
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000003.jpg'>
     
  4. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    wait heres some more
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000020.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000025.jpg'>
     
  5. Zee_Zee

    Zee_Zee Guest

    WHO CARES. YOU SUCK
     
  6. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    wow zee im sure your way fucking better but what you dont have a scanner and all you can do is talk shit
    wow man your tight
     
  7. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 12, 2000 Messages: 6,979 Likes Received: 2
    not bad at all.

    I'm not really a fan of the styles just because it's damn hard
    to picture those drawings translated to a wall, but overall the
    quality is there. I think the letterforms are pushed a little too far
    and come off looking a little sloppy but I'm sure that you will refine
    it with more work. In most of the drawings the lines seem to have a
    bumpy outline which isn't really my thing either, but it can work some
    of the time. I guess my advice (if you were looking for advice) is to
    smooth out the lines, and dont push the shapes as hard. Also try to
    keep more unity in the overall shape. (the green/blue sharpie one
    has a good form, most of the others are a little discoherent)

    there ya go.
     
  8. Zee_Zee

    Zee_Zee Guest

    a man who is so sure of himself is always right
     
  9. mogilny

    mogilny Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 1,582 Likes Received: 0
    there alright....
     
  10. rental

    rental Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Jul 1, 2001 Messages: 7,641 Likes Received: 1
     
  11. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    thanks kilo
    at first i just thought "fuck you" my shits dope but now i see what your talking about and you absolutely right

    oh and zee im sure your better than me but ive never seen you post a picture of your stuff so from my point of view you shouldnt talk...
     
  12. One_in_Ten

    One_in_Ten New Jack

    Joined: Mar 11, 2002 Messages: 2 Likes Received: 0
    scott suggests the following:

    i notice it looks like you tag is very west coast, like you bit the letters from othr tags... which is fine to start. I can tell you i know because all the othe writing looks like sloppy school writing with out style.



    too many people learn how to use a can but never any handwriting style.

    the graff progression should go like this:

    tag. tag tag. until you can di it blind folder with the wrong hand. then work and being able to write anything, say a sentence or what your crew stands for, with style and flow, even if its just clean simple and readable.
    next.

    simples simple simples.

    throw-ups where you styleize the simples, in to quickies.

    peices...


    as with most young writers your getting ahead of yourself.


    there is nothing worse than seeing a beginner ruin his peice by tossing big ugly distracting tags all around it.

    take a look through the paper thread and youll see what i mean. the "master" you will notice leave the focus on the sketch or painting not the tag. if you wanna tag go bomb wanna peice di ti and leave it t that.



    and im out.
     
  13. LOReSeVeNTeN

    LOReSeVeNTeN Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 379 Likes Received: 0
    yeah i can definetly see what your saying
    but i think most of you comment is based on one of the mother pieces
    which just started out as a waste page you know i was just doing writes on it then a while later i did the piece but thanks for the advice
     
  14. £piK uNo

    £piK uNo New Jack

    Joined: May 20, 2003 Messages: 98 Likes Received: 0
    I like your graff....
    it ain't the same ol' thing
    everyone pushes....


    i agree with you- zee should shut his trap....
     
  15. arden ~ AEC

    arden ~ AEC New Jack

    Joined: Jul 3, 2003 Messages: 35 Likes Received: 0
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