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LOReSeVeNTeN

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shit i posted them and then i viewed the post several times and the pics were up... and now like half an hour later they are not there anymore can anyone help me

this shit is getting really annoying

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Guest Zee_Zee
Originally posted by LOReSeVeNTeN

shit i posted them and then i viewed the post several times and the pics were up... and now like half an hour later they are not there anymore can anyone help me

this shit is getting really annoying

WHO CARES. YOU SUCK

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not bad at all.

 

I'm not really a fan of the styles just because it's damn hard

to picture those drawings translated to a wall, but overall the

quality is there. I think the letterforms are pushed a little too far

and come off looking a little sloppy but I'm sure that you will refine

it with more work. In most of the drawings the lines seem to have a

bumpy outline which isn't really my thing either, but it can work some

of the time. I guess my advice (if you were looking for advice) is to

smooth out the lines, and dont push the shapes as hard. Also try to

keep more unity in the overall shape. (the green/blue sharpie one

has a good form, most of the others are a little discoherent)

 

there ya go.

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Guest Zee_Zee
Originally posted by LOReSeVeNTeN

wow zee im sure your way fucking better but what you dont have a scanner and all you can do is talk shit

wow man your tight

 

a man who is so sure of himself is always right

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Originally posted by Kilo7-

 

the letterforms are pushed a little too far

and come off looking a little sloppy

keep more unity in the overall shape

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thanks kilo

at first i just thought "fuck you" my shits dope but now i see what your talking about and you absolutely right

 

oh and zee im sure your better than me but ive never seen you post a picture of your stuff so from my point of view you shouldnt talk...

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scott suggests the following:

 

i notice it looks like you tag is very west coast, like you bit the letters from othr tags... which is fine to start. I can tell you i know because all the othe writing looks like sloppy school writing with out style.

 

 

 

too many people learn how to use a can but never any handwriting style.

 

the graff progression should go like this:

 

tag. tag tag. until you can di it blind folder with the wrong hand. then work and being able to write anything, say a sentence or what your crew stands for, with style and flow, even if its just clean simple and readable.

next.

 

simples simple simples.

 

throw-ups where you styleize the simples, in to quickies.

 

peices...

 

 

as with most young writers your getting ahead of yourself.

 

 

there is nothing worse than seeing a beginner ruin his peice by tossing big ugly distracting tags all around it.

 

take a look through the paper thread and youll see what i mean. the "master" you will notice leave the focus on the sketch or painting not the tag. if you wanna tag go bomb wanna peice di ti and leave it t that.

 

 

 

and im out.

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yeah i can definetly see what your saying

but i think most of you comment is based on one of the mother pieces

which just started out as a waste page you know i was just doing writes on it then a while later i did the piece but thanks for the advice

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I like your graff....

it ain't the same ol' thing

everyone pushes....

 

 

i agree with you- zee should shut his trap....

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thumbs down 4now

 

work on

 

angles

 

colors

 

letters

 

style

 

.....FIX IT...and come back

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