LOReSeVeNTeN Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 ok i finally think i can post pics so heres what i got judge me... keep in mind some of them are really old http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400193837_005P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353318_003P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353318_006P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_004P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_005P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_006P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_007P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_008P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_009P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400353323_010P.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 shit i posted them and then i viewed the post several times and the pics were up... and now like half an hour later they are not there anymore can anyone help me this shit is getting really annoying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 i might have gotten it again i guess http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000022.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000023.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000024.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000021.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000019.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000018.jpg'> this one in sharpies http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000011.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000008.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000005.jpg'> this one is really old like my first painting mostly acrilic alittle black sharpie http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000003.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 wait heres some more http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000020.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00269266f00000025.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zee_Zee Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 Originally posted by LOReSeVeNTeN shit i posted them and then i viewed the post several times and the pics were up... and now like half an hour later they are not there anymore can anyone help me this shit is getting really annoying WHO CARES. YOU SUCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 wow zee im sure your way fucking better but what you dont have a scanner and all you can do is talk shit wow man your tight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RumPuncher Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 not bad at all. I'm not really a fan of the styles just because it's damn hard to picture those drawings translated to a wall, but overall the quality is there. I think the letterforms are pushed a little too far and come off looking a little sloppy but I'm sure that you will refine it with more work. In most of the drawings the lines seem to have a bumpy outline which isn't really my thing either, but it can work some of the time. I guess my advice (if you were looking for advice) is to smooth out the lines, and dont push the shapes as hard. Also try to keep more unity in the overall shape. (the green/blue sharpie one has a good form, most of the others are a little discoherent) there ya go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zee_Zee Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Originally posted by LOReSeVeNTeN wow zee im sure your way fucking better but what you dont have a scanner and all you can do is talk shit wow man your tight a man who is so sure of himself is always right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mogilny Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 there alright.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rental Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Originally posted by Kilo7- the letterforms are pushed a little too far and come off looking a little sloppy keep more unity in the overall shape Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 thanks kilo at first i just thought "fuck you" my shits dope but now i see what your talking about and you absolutely right oh and zee im sure your better than me but ive never seen you post a picture of your stuff so from my point of view you shouldnt talk... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
One_in_Ten Posted July 5, 2003 Share Posted July 5, 2003 scott suggests the following: i notice it looks like you tag is very west coast, like you bit the letters from othr tags... which is fine to start. I can tell you i know because all the othe writing looks like sloppy school writing with out style. too many people learn how to use a can but never any handwriting style. the graff progression should go like this: tag. tag tag. until you can di it blind folder with the wrong hand. then work and being able to write anything, say a sentence or what your crew stands for, with style and flow, even if its just clean simple and readable. next. simples simple simples. throw-ups where you styleize the simples, in to quickies. peices... as with most young writers your getting ahead of yourself. there is nothing worse than seeing a beginner ruin his peice by tossing big ugly distracting tags all around it. take a look through the paper thread and youll see what i mean. the "master" you will notice leave the focus on the sketch or painting not the tag. if you wanna tag go bomb wanna peice di ti and leave it t that. and im out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted July 5, 2003 Author Share Posted July 5, 2003 yeah i can definetly see what your saying but i think most of you comment is based on one of the mother pieces which just started out as a waste page you know i was just doing writes on it then a while later i did the piece but thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£piK uNo Posted July 5, 2003 Share Posted July 5, 2003 I like your graff.... it ain't the same ol' thing everyone pushes.... i agree with you- zee should shut his trap.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arden ~ AEC Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 scott lajock word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 thumbs down 4now work on angles colors letters style .....FIX IT...and come back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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