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Frist Timer, Tell Me What You Think

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by NuWave, Feb 9, 2004.

  1. NuWave

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    Frist Timer, Tell Me What You Think

    Discussion started by NuWave - Feb 9, 2004

    Hey, its my frist time ever atemping this so tell me what you think and i no they suck so you you don't have to tell me.

    Pics are Here


    Thanx
     
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    http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/3/76/36/117337636RYSBdT_ph.jpg'>
    [img]http://community.webshots.com/s/image9/3/81/80/117338180OjwSHh_ph.jpg'>
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    you welcome.
    first try my ass.....
     
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    NuWave - Replied Feb 9, 2004

    thanx, but i woulda done that but they never show up so i didn't bother, i would if theyt would work but soem times they do and sometimes they don't
     
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    ok.... your letters dont flow, meaning, i dont want to keeping going to the left.

    i dont even see the 'd' at first glance, its too small.

    try seeing the letters as like shapes and making them flow with or into eachother. stay away from arrows, connectors and all that at first, just play with letter shapes, then add all that extra stuff.

    you color scheme isnt working. get a book on color and learn about warms colors, cool colors, desaturated and saturdated and then learn to play with depth through color and learn to use color to pull your eye into and through the piece. again, go slow....use a few colors at first and then work into what looks like a bunch of mashed up skittles.

    get rid of the can and pencil, they do nothing for it....if your piece cant stand alone as just letters, all the colors, characters and whatever else isnt going to make it look fresh.

    the second one is better than the first, youre seeing the light....keep going with that, refine it more and more, try to make it flow better and better each time.

    keep looking at good writers work and see how they do it, dont bite them, but realize why their stuff is hot and try to apply the same principals to your stuff. stick with it and youll get better over time.
     
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    thanx for the advice, i will keep all that inmind
     
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    structure, but im toy remember
     
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    ladykiller hit the nail on the head

    thumbs down for now ,keep it up though ,and dont fuck with the background and adding shit till u get letters strait;)
     
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    well keep working at it...keep practicing, neva give up and you'll eventually graduate to king
     
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    yeah, thanx guys me a king :king: i don't ever think i can get hta good
     
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    trust me, work hard at it long enough, stay dedicated and you'll king it
     
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    i got this popup which is cool
     
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    trainbuffer - Replied Feb 10, 2004

    damn that pencil looks like my dick after i tried playing a trick on the gorillas in the cage


    im sure those letters looked good but before you added that raid can on it they kinda got deformed, it happens;)
     
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    http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/0/88/25/84408825DNodyi_ph.jpg'>

    i love this,,,,,
     
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