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Frist Timer, Tell Me What You Think

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by NuWave, Feb 9, 2004.

  1. NuWave

    NuWave New Jack

    Joined: Feb 5, 2004 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 0
    Hey, its my frist time ever atemping this so tell me what you think and i no they suck so you you don't have to tell me.

    Pics are Here


    Thanx
     
  2. NuWave

    NuWave New Jack

    Joined: Feb 5, 2004 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 0
  3. KiSe

    KiSe Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 18, 2003 Messages: 1,354 Likes Received: 0
    http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/3/76/36/117337636RYSBdT_ph.jpg'>
    [img]http://community.webshots.com/s/image9/3/81/80/117338180OjwSHh_ph.jpg'>
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    you welcome.
    first try my ass.....
     
  4. NuWave

    NuWave New Jack

    Joined: Feb 5, 2004 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 0
    thanx, but i woulda done that but they never show up so i didn't bother, i would if theyt would work but soem times they do and sometimes they don't
     
  5. ladykiller

    ladykiller New Jack

    Joined: Feb 9, 2004 Messages: 6 Likes Received: 0
    ok.... your letters dont flow, meaning, i dont want to keeping going to the left.

    i dont even see the 'd' at first glance, its too small.

    try seeing the letters as like shapes and making them flow with or into eachother. stay away from arrows, connectors and all that at first, just play with letter shapes, then add all that extra stuff.

    you color scheme isnt working. get a book on color and learn about warms colors, cool colors, desaturated and saturdated and then learn to play with depth through color and learn to use color to pull your eye into and through the piece. again, go slow....use a few colors at first and then work into what looks like a bunch of mashed up skittles.

    get rid of the can and pencil, they do nothing for it....if your piece cant stand alone as just letters, all the colors, characters and whatever else isnt going to make it look fresh.

    the second one is better than the first, youre seeing the light....keep going with that, refine it more and more, try to make it flow better and better each time.

    keep looking at good writers work and see how they do it, dont bite them, but realize why their stuff is hot and try to apply the same principals to your stuff. stick with it and youll get better over time.
     
  6. NuWave

    NuWave New Jack

    Joined: Feb 5, 2004 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 0
    thanx for the advice, i will keep all that inmind
     
  7. Overtime

    Overtime Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 13,986 Likes Received: 311
    structure, but im toy remember
     
  8. WrIot

    WrIot Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 2, 2002 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 0
    ladykiller hit the nail on the head

    thumbs down for now ,keep it up though ,and dont fuck with the background and adding shit till u get letters strait;)
     
  9. why write?

    why write? Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 19, 2003 Messages: 5,859 Likes Received: 1
    well keep working at it...keep practicing, neva give up and you'll eventually graduate to king
     
  10. NuWave

    NuWave New Jack

    Joined: Feb 5, 2004 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 0
    yeah, thanx guys me a king :king: i don't ever think i can get hta good
     
  11. why write?

    why write? Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 19, 2003 Messages: 5,859 Likes Received: 1
    trust me, work hard at it long enough, stay dedicated and you'll king it
     
  12. trainbuffer

    trainbuffer Banned

    Joined: Sep 3, 2003 Messages: 274 Likes Received: 0
    http://oas-central.realmedia.com/RealMedia/ads/adstream_sx.ads/www.ap.com/netflipjan/100024395@x11'>
    i got this popup which is cool
     
  13. trainbuffer

    trainbuffer Banned

    Joined: Sep 3, 2003 Messages: 274 Likes Received: 0
    damn that pencil looks like my dick after i tried playing a trick on the gorillas in the cage


    im sure those letters looked good but before you added that raid can on it they kinda got deformed, it happens;)
     
  14. trainbuffer

    trainbuffer Banned

    Joined: Sep 3, 2003 Messages: 274 Likes Received: 0
  15. Overtime

    Overtime Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 13,986 Likes Received: 311
    http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/0/88/25/84408825DNodyi_ph.jpg'>

    i love this,,,,,
     
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