NuWave Posted February 9, 2004 Share Posted February 9, 2004 Hey, its my frist time ever atemping this so tell me what you think and i no they suck so you you don't have to tell me. Pics are Here Thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 9, 2004 Author Share Posted February 9, 2004 if that didn't work this should Here they are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted February 9, 2004 Share Posted February 9, 2004 http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/3/76/36/117337636RYSBdT_ph.jpg'> http://community.webshots.com/s/image9/3/81/80/117338180OjwSHh_ph.jpg'> http://community.webshots.com/s/image6/3/84/37/117338437XAujmV_ph.jpg'> you welcome. first try my ass..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 9, 2004 Author Share Posted February 9, 2004 thanx, but i woulda done that but they never show up so i didn't bother, i would if theyt would work but soem times they do and sometimes they don't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladykiller Posted February 9, 2004 Share Posted February 9, 2004 Originally posted by NuWave if that didn't work this should Here they are ok.... your letters dont flow, meaning, i dont want to keeping going to the left. i dont even see the 'd' at first glance, its too small. try seeing the letters as like shapes and making them flow with or into eachother. stay away from arrows, connectors and all that at first, just play with letter shapes, then add all that extra stuff. you color scheme isnt working. get a book on color and learn about warms colors, cool colors, desaturated and saturdated and then learn to play with depth through color and learn to use color to pull your eye into and through the piece. again, go slow....use a few colors at first and then work into what looks like a bunch of mashed up skittles. get rid of the can and pencil, they do nothing for it....if your piece cant stand alone as just letters, all the colors, characters and whatever else isnt going to make it look fresh. the second one is better than the first, youre seeing the light....keep going with that, refine it more and more, try to make it flow better and better each time. keep looking at good writers work and see how they do it, dont bite them, but realize why their stuff is hot and try to apply the same principals to your stuff. stick with it and youll get better over time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 9, 2004 Author Share Posted February 9, 2004 thanx for the advice, i will keep all that inmind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 structure, but im toy remember Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 ladykiller hit the nail on the head thumbs down for now ,keep it up though ,and dont fuck with the background and adding shit till u get letters strait;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 well keep working at it...keep practicing, neva give up and you'll eventually graduate to king Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 10, 2004 Author Share Posted February 10, 2004 yeah, thanx guys me a king :king: i don't ever think i can get hta good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 trust me, work hard at it long enough, stay dedicated and you'll king it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trainbuffer Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 http://oas-central.realmedia.com/RealMedia/ads/adstream_sx.ads/www.ap.com/netflipjan/100024395@x11'> i got this popup which is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trainbuffer Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 damn that pencil looks like my dick after i tried playing a trick on the gorillas in the cage im sure those letters looked good but before you added that raid can on it they kinda got deformed, it happens;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trainbuffer Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 http://community.webshots.com/album/83360652yVGBGA i found this on that same site:lick: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/0/88/25/84408825DNodyi_ph.jpg'> i love this,,,,, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 Whoa those look bad but i think u'll def improve in weeks. Start simple. Get ur 3d right and doin cans n caps in pieces is really played out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 ............ yeah, thanx guys me a king i don't ever think i can get that good ok then stop writing, dont put yourself down. seriously, dont think of your limits, think positive, this shit dont come over night. practice kid, at least have a positive look on it. these people come in here and give you the advice you asked for and you diss yourself, get some self respect, youve got some talent, if you work at it you may very well "graduate to king", just realize it doesnt come overnight. keep it simple, props for tryin. 2 shiny pennies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nelchron Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 i like this page check this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 10, 2004 Author Share Posted February 10, 2004 aight, thanx i have been practicing some durning school and when ever i get time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 http://community.webshots.com/s/image7/3/76/36/117337636RYSBdT_ph.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philth215 Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 wow.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 12, 2004 Author Share Posted February 12, 2004 Originally posted by Philth215 wow.... wow... as in wow its good or wow it sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 this is my advice... start out with throwie letters and block letters draw and draw non stop go on for 2 hrs straight draw in class and draw anytime you can.... but keep practicing the samething over and over again.. dont use color not even 3d or shadows just outlines ... dont use pencil... EVER. Use pen you have to learn how to get it one time.... throwie letters and block letters ... for block letters try to make them look nice, PARALLEL and all the SAME SIZE... draw and draw over and over again make them parallel ,try to make all the letters same size and look similar to each other....an same with throwie letters.like some one mentioned earlier like at other writers work and get influenced from it... dont bite directly... anyways practice and use pen only and draw draw draw get good at paper then start painting.... work on your throw up letters and your block letters keep in mind what i told you .... hope this helps later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 always use pencil, always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuWave Posted February 17, 2004 Author Share Posted February 17, 2004 yeah, i draw in pencil and then go over it in black sharpie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thiSINKsux Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 Originally posted by NuWave yeah, i draw in pencil and then go over it in black sharpie dont use sharpies, i hate those damn markers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drinkxylene Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 Originally posted by thiSINKsux dont use sharpies, i hate those damn markers this kid uses crayons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thiSINKsux Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 i do use crayons he got me, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drinkxylene Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 Originally posted by thiSINKsux i do use crayons he got me, thats right yo your mom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thiSINKsux Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 Originally posted by drinkxylene thats right yo your mom. bitch run yo mouf again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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