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few blackbook pieces

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by EccE, Aug 22, 2002.

  1. EccE

    EccE 12oz Junior Member

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    few blackbook pieces

    Discussion started by EccE - Aug 22, 2002

    I havent painted anything in a long time and would like some feed back on these new sketches I have been doing
    http://www.artisdead.org/graff1.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.artisdead.org/graff3.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.artisdead.org/lollygirl.jpg'> [IMG]
     
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  2. TresOne

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    TresOne - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    Shit, i like 'em, but the first one is a wee bit too cluttered for my eyes.




    ..first..:nut:
     
  3. krie

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    krie - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    i like that girl
     
  4. EwhORE

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    EwhORE - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    bleh..
     
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  5. seno.oner

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    seno.oner - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    i like em
     
  6. CamS

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    CamS - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    i like...style is original or at least i havent seen anything like it...but dope all in its own...
     
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    SersOne-NRS - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    k...all i can give ya credit for is the colors and shit....inside the letters looks tight but the letters themself i dont like much really......
     
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  8. stupid412

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    stupid412 - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    i like the gil shes ok..the shadows need some work but i like her..
    but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all...
    JUST MY 2 CENTS
    ha i cant spell for shit..
     
  9. EccE

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    EccE - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe
    I guess they dont always work!
     
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  10. --zeSto--

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    --zeSto-- - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    I see what you're trying to do.
    It takes a lot of skill to pull off that 'classic wildstyle' look.

    your stuff just doesn't seem polished enough.

    now where's izzy or zone? now that's so polished it shines.
     
  11. EccE

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    EccE - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    Ok this is all great feedback and as I say I havent done any graff for about 10 years.
    So what could I do to improve my style?
     
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  12. stupid412

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    stupid412 - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    i think you sorta missed out on what i said..
    first i said every peice had litle or no structure and not just the girl peice.. sure there almost appealing but no structer at a glose look..
    and again JUST MY 2 CENTS!
    draw letters first and then try to add in curves or arrows or whatever...
    post a black and white flick and youll see it better...
    you cant hide a goofy style in a good color scheme
     
  13. EccE

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    EccE - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    OK. maybe I am just getting old but I just cant see where Im going wrong???

    http://artisdead.org/bwpiece.jpg'>
    [img]http://artisdead.org/pencilsketch.jpg'>
     
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  14. stupid412

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    stupid412 - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at..
    im a letter nazi...
    here are letters..
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality)
    you put in 5 min of work look what you can do..
    your letter quality isnt really there..
    maybe your not looking in the right place
    or maybe im just a stupid little kid.:confused:
     
  15. EccE

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    EccE - Replied Aug 22, 2002

    Ha Ha Ha.
    No, I appreciate your help and when compared to the pic you posted I can see a difference. Can you suggest some other writers in a similar style that I could take a look at?
     
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