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few blackbook pieces

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by EccE, Aug 22, 2002.

  1. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    I havent painted anything in a long time and would like some feed back on these new sketches I have been doing
    http://www.artisdead.org/graff1.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.artisdead.org/graff3.jpg'>
    [img]http://www.artisdead.org/lollygirl.jpg'> [IMG]
     
  2. TresOne

    TresOne Guest

    Shit, i like 'em, but the first one is a wee bit too cluttered for my eyes.




    ..first..:nut:
     
  3. krie

    krie Guest

    i like that girl
     
  4. EwhORE

    EwhORE New Jack

    Joined: Apr 4, 2002 Messages: 58 Likes Received: 0
  5. seno.oner

    seno.oner Guest

  6. CamS

    CamS Member

    Joined: Aug 12, 2002 Messages: 303 Likes Received: 0
    i like...style is original or at least i havent seen anything like it...but dope all in its own...
     
  7. SersOne-NRS

    SersOne-NRS New Jack

    Joined: Jan 10, 2001 Messages: 14 Likes Received: 0
    k...all i can give ya credit for is the colors and shit....inside the letters looks tight but the letters themself i dont like much really......
     
  8. stupid412

    stupid412 Guest

    i like the gil shes ok..the shadows need some work but i like her..
    but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all...
    JUST MY 2 CENTS
    ha i cant spell for shit..
     
  9. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe
    I guess they dont always work!
     
  10. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Guest

    I see what you're trying to do.
    It takes a lot of skill to pull off that 'classic wildstyle' look.

    your stuff just doesn't seem polished enough.

    now where's izzy or zone? now that's so polished it shines.
     
  11. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    Ok this is all great feedback and as I say I havent done any graff for about 10 years.
    So what could I do to improve my style?
     
  12. stupid412

    stupid412 Guest

    i think you sorta missed out on what i said..
    first i said every peice had litle or no structure and not just the girl peice.. sure there almost appealing but no structer at a glose look..
    and again JUST MY 2 CENTS!
    draw letters first and then try to add in curves or arrows or whatever...
    post a black and white flick and youll see it better...
    you cant hide a goofy style in a good color scheme
     
  13. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    OK. maybe I am just getting old but I just cant see where Im going wrong???

    http://artisdead.org/bwpiece.jpg'>
    [img]http://artisdead.org/pencilsketch.jpg'>
     
  14. stupid412

    stupid412 Guest

    in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at..
    im a letter nazi...
    here are letters..
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality)
    you put in 5 min of work look what you can do..
    your letter quality isnt really there..
    maybe your not looking in the right place
    or maybe im just a stupid little kid.:confused:
     
  15. EccE

    EccE Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2002 Messages: 117 Likes Received: 0
    Ha Ha Ha.
    No, I appreciate your help and when compared to the pic you posted I can see a difference. Can you suggest some other writers in a similar style that I could take a look at?
     
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