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few blackbook pieces

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Guest TresOne

Shit, i like 'em, but the first one is a wee bit too cluttered for my eyes.

 

 

 

 

..first..:nut:

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i like...style is original or at least i havent seen anything like it...but dope all in its own...

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k...all i can give ya credit for is the colors and shit....inside the letters looks tight but the letters themself i dont like much really......

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Guest stupid412

i like the gil shes ok..the shadows need some work but i like her..

but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all...

JUST MY 2 CENTS

ha i cant spell for shit..

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Originally posted by stupid412

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but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all...

 

The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe

I guess they dont always work!

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Guest --zeSto--

I see what you're trying to do.

It takes a lot of skill to pull off that 'classic wildstyle' look.

 

your stuff just doesn't seem polished enough.

 

now where's izzy or zone? now that's so polished it shines.

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Ok this is all great feedback and as I say I havent done any graff for about 10 years.

So what could I do to improve my style?

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Guest stupid412
The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe

i think you sorta missed out on what i said..

first i said every peice had litle or no structure and not just the girl peice.. sure there almost appealing but no structer at a glose look..

and again JUST MY 2 CENTS!

draw letters first and then try to add in curves or arrows or whatever...

post a black and white flick and youll see it better...

you cant hide a goofy style in a good color scheme

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Guest stupid412

in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at..

im a letter nazi...

here are letters..

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality)

you put in 5 min of work look what you can do..

your letter quality isnt really there..

maybe your not looking in the right place

or maybe im just a stupid little kid.:confused:

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Ha Ha Ha.

No, I appreciate your help and when compared to the pic you posted I can see a difference. Can you suggest some other writers in a similar style that I could take a look at?

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Guest stupid412

ecce

i comend you on your stencles.. i like them alot maybe you can help me out with them...

just start out with a real basic style...then gradually add on....

this is a good site ive learned alot from... www.mikrone37.com its in the process of a big update so check back ( a good example and writer i look up to for stuff like that is cres, check him out)

if you have aim i have some cool examples stupididiot865 ...

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Thanx. I will check them out.

I have been doing stencils and stuff for aout 2 years but have been taking it serious the whole time and really trying to push it. Im only just starting to layer the colours.

What would you like to know about them?

There is a good stencil tips page at - http://www.happyfeettravels.org/Stencils/HowToFAQ.html

This is good to get you started

 

There are also some good tips in the 'stencilling 101' thread in the yard

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does anyone else notice how nice everyone in this thread is?im sorry, but i just have to throw in "YOU ARE A TOY!" "YOU SUCK, GO PAINT FAG!"......but i think old dude has potential. keep at it!

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im with you

 

ditto, he has alot going for him he just got a aussie type style not realy true to the letters... look at old school new york shit.. you will see how every letter has same fetures (sp):D

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Originally posted by stupid412

in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at..

im a letter nazi...

here are letters..

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality)

you put in 5 min of work look what you can do..

your letter quality isnt really there..

 

Im going to agree with this, because I have seen those letters drawn, and Ive seen people try and paint those...and from what ive seen they come out looking wack as fuck....unless you have can control, and have paint experience of course...

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OK so I took some advice but went a little crazy on the arrows. Apart from the arrows - is this getting better?

normaloutline1.jpg

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Guest drunken phil
Originally posted by krie

i like that girl

her hand is broken, get a doctor

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