^forget that color, decoration, 3d, and modifications to your lines exist.
i like the overall shape of the piece. your sense of motion seems like it will turn out well.
but keep your lines as straight as possible. no notches, connections, decorations, or anything like that. try to avoid curves even. do as little as you can.
you can add all the decorations later when you've gotten to the point of just wasting time.