Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 First posts in here. I just want some feeback, hope everyone enjoys em. Don't care what kind of feedback. Thanks! A van. A drawing inspired by a shoe print A lava lamp A crazy character(The Evil K Krew Lord) Another character(No Name) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendicott Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 GASP -- im likin those char's especialyl the old guy... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Blart.BOS- Nice American Government notes. I remember the dred scott case from that shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Yo, A.R., Try and get your stuff to blend together smoothly and it would help you improve alot. Try going more with the older school def of Wildstyle, letters meshing together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 BLART that last mar is fuking ill dude.. eras that one u posted is ill... the ruck u last posted the extensions u made would look better with the left part of the R and the right part of the K instead.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 some examples of old school wilds? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 stage 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c_ames91 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 BLART thats sick! seems like i've seen it before....haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 like that. Yea Can sum1 give me some feedbak? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 your letters are ok you need to work on those and your characters are cool thats all really haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 your letters are ok you need to work on those and your characters are cool thats all really haha Thanks man. Even the letters that are coming out of the faces from the smoke? What about the ones on the van? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Actually, Shez, your letters aren't all too good. Those characters look pretty much unoriginal, do some simples. You see those letters on your keyboard? Do those letters, scan it, post it, and progress from there. How old are you Shez? Are you young? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 18. Not to be defensive or anything, but what's wrong with them? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roa1 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 bump for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Shez, trust me, everything is wrong with them. Arrows everywhere? Do you know what the purpose of arrows are? It's not to add funk, it's to cover negative space. Don't do arrows yet though, do simple letters. Your letters look like a bad attempt at graffiti, like they were drawn up by a little kid. Are you sure you're 18? No offense homie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Shez, trust me, everything is wrong with them. Arrows everywhere? Do you know what the purpose of arrows are? It's not to add funk, it's to cover negative space. Don't do arrows yet though, do simple letters. Your letters look like a bad attempt at graffiti, like they were drawn up by a little kid. Are you sure you're 18? No offense homie. :lol: i like the block letters cuz even the ordinary everyday man can read em. How bout these? And it might just be your taste talking or your point of view as an artist. Bet ya don't dig Ich's stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 You're still doing it wrong. And it's not my taste talking, I know the difference between good and ugly graff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 yea shez it sucks :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 Those are from like a year ago. I was just seeing. And I've seen those some peoples' posts and I could less of a rat's ass of what they have to say. And I think what has become popular sometimes is just what is accepted as good. And some people think some writers suck because they don't stick strictly to certain colors and go for what is aestheticly pleasing or write in a certain style. None of this is reffering to you btw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 First posts in here. I just want some feeback, hope everyone enjoys em. Don't care what kind of feedback. Thanks! A van. A drawing inspired by a shoe print A lava lamp A crazy character(The Evil K Krew Lord) Another character(No Name) goood lord, no simples my man simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 wutup mickey shez...your horrible...no beef startin... you half to start from fuckin scratch everything yo do erase n your memory for now..since you dont kno the concept of block letters ...do the letters on ur keyboard..mickey five's taiste isnt talkin its reality..hes knows wassup n so do i ..n also many other writers on here...take advice n learn from it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 here Btw. Using arrows to fill up negative spaces is adding funk in all technicality. Does this basically translate into "Go Big Or Go Home?" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 like i said i think your characters are cool but could still use a bit of work. and your letters need help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 like i said i think your characters are cool but could still use a bit of work. and your letters need help Btw. U missed a spot at the top leg of your K. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 ok i did this simple tell me what you thinkk and yes i know the outline and crown are crap :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNEAK_EM_504 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 dont try n play ruck man ...tht motherfucker is productive ..and listens without disrespect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 tell me what you think any crits are highly apreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SNEAK_EM_504 Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 supra -make ur s bigger...but not tht much...n yourr kickout leg to ur r str8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shez Posted March 6, 2008 Share Posted March 6, 2008 dont try n play ruck man ...tht motherfucker is productive ..and listens without disrespect I'm not. I'm tellin him he missd a spot. Chill the fuck out. Look at his last sketch and you will see that he missd that spot and I was just telling him that. God man, u need an to loosen up and quit jumping to conclusions and makin yourself look like an ass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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