FLOW, You're on the right track. Keep everything simple. buy like 300 pieces of paper and do the same outline over and over until you finish. repeat with the tag. Each time, look at it and try to see whats right and whats wrong. Eventually you'll clean it up.
SPER, I Really like your stuff. The red and blue simple's letters are so nice.
4EYES, Really Nice. The doom piece is killer, the throwie kinda looks like YEYES, even though the y is different. My 2 cents.
DIC3 Simplify. Try to work on your letter structure, use bars if you don't yet.
BAZE sketch 4 crits by ...BZ, on Flickr