yetsio

says eons. some crits would be nice. ill crit some other shit in here in a lil bit.

bottom of the page bump

Freak, the E and A are too close together kotes, dope.

lurk yetsio i guess this goes here, no? and skum gets my vote. thats fucking dope

I have a question. I'm battling this kid on another forum because he thinks he's too good for simples, and I'm looking for a thread where I could post it, so that we could get votes. Where would I post it? This thread seems like its for like, full forum type shit. So, any help would be great.

word. no problem. even if it is an old style, cant help progressing it, right?

Your letter structure isn't weird, it's just a little off. The leg of the R shouldn't connect to the backbone. It should connect to the loop. And the middle bar of the H should actually be connected somehow to both sides. And then just some shitty extensions. The cutback extensions (like on the top of the T) usually don't work. S try to stay away from them, or at least use them sparingly. Also, the flow of the piece is weird. The W is one way, and then the RAT is the opposite way, and the H is just straighter. Try to keep it consistent. Like, have all the letters like \\\\\ or||||| or ///// or even mix it up /\/\/\ Just keep the flow consistent. One or two letters going the opposite way can kill the piece, like how it is in the second piece you posted. The S is all on it's lonesome. And watch your spacing. The A is really hidden on the wrath piece,

im fairly sure that its just the photo, although, i think i did miss some highlights in 2 spots. but it says eons. i fucked up the E really bad. i have to work on it more.

critssss would be nice fucked up my e really bad. freestyles for the losss

that JKS story is illlll.

Another good example of how to rock a simple is Ichabod.

That 'Here's your fucking simple' page is dope.

I know I'm shouldn't be posting in this thread, but I just wanted to post the exchange here for him.

Kote, your 3d is messed up. They're all different widths.

Shaken- Your shit is toooo boxy. Loosen it up!

word. was thinking the same thing. and gerald. edit : the fuck? VV I dont even have those flicks.. hahah edit2: now there gone... wtf.

Stop biting. Do simples. Go to toy thread. Sener, I'll try to get you your exchange by the end of the weekend. If not, then by like, Monday. Sorry, I've been really busy lately.

Those two charachs dont look like theyre from the same person...

Word man. I dig it. The E and O are ill as hell. Ill get your shit soon.

Nuse - Your piece for Dies would be so much more legit if you took out a few extensions. Some are just wack. If the circled ones were taken out, and the backbone of the D was curved instead of straight, this piece would be dope.

Just - Too inconsistent. Both in widths and style. Dumb it down. Sade - Simples.

Bump for crits?

Got that right... Do some simples and bars. Keep your widths the same. All that jazz.