Dry Wretch
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i couldnt be fucked to put any thought into giving you crits, so i just circled what i thought was wrong. may or may not help. and someone already told you about your inconsistent bar sizes, so i disregarded that.
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dude above me is right, dont fuck with phillys if you arent from philly.
but other than that, tighten that shit up, really pay attention to what you're doing with the letters, how you angle them, how proportionate they are to the rest of the letters, where they bend and kick out and curl up and if thats where you want them to do that, blah blah blah. that way you wont get ugly, jumbled letters with loops in em.
go to brickslayers and look around at tags and shit. not just your city, but from everywhere. see how they flow, how one letter goes into the next, what connections are commonly used, why those connections make sense, what about a letter makes it look good, yadda yadda.
and get a blank notebook and just start tagging it. ALOT. and not with just your name, other people's names. in your style and theirs. try out how you think they'd write your name for yourself.
but yeah.
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is it okay if i ask whatever happened to si? or is that some "if you dont know, you dont need to know" type shit?
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gross
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easy with that shit fags
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speak like the middle one....
finally found a throw that im satisfiedwith...
so i guess i'm the only one that thinks this is bad?
work on that some more, man. and lose the pointy hats. i'm so sick of seeing that. dont switch cases out of the blue like with that 'a'. that generally looks bad. and work on your tags more. ALOT more. like filling blank sheets of computer paper more.
that's one of the things annoys me with this thread. you guys are so keen on posting pieces and straightletters and shit, but tags are no where to be seen. if they are, its some hurt shit off to the side of a piece. not saying mine are the greatest, but damn.
but i'm just sayin'
the only reason i even said anything was cuz kids were telling you that looked good, and i was just like, "nah, son."
can we get some more hands in here?
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here we FUCKING go again
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That's an a, I believe.
Dumb it down, dry wretch.
nah, its a d.
and thanks, sneekatoke, for well, legit crits.
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if everyone ignores my stuff, does it mean i should just fuck off?
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um, for the simple, you're prolly tired of hearing this, but make your letters outta bars when you're first starting out. it really helps your shit line up right. and remember to keep them the same size and parallel to themselves.
as for the hand, scrap that and just write your name in your own handwriting as neat as possible and go from there.
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you making the tops/bottoms of the letters the same on purpose. especially that "make every letter pointy at the bottom" shit you've got going. that always looks bad. to me its like a cheap gimmick.
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and speak, knock it off with that forced flow in your throws.
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A-Z inked
fuck me, but maybe you shouldn't use spine for EVERY letter. and most of them suck. its like you've got too much shit going on that doesn't fit together. the d, e, and f are the only semi ok ones, and they can still be tweaked more.
i suck at crits, so the only thing i can really tell you is that most of them suck. and even then i could be wrong.
but anyways, anyone wanna tell me whats wrong with mine?
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so yeah
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wow, that dase dude bit dash so hard with that throw.
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dude... quit before you get hurt. like, seriously.
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chill with that shit
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ahaha
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Talk is cheap. That statement is for all the toys who shout themselves out on here. ha ha ha ha ha. Imagine JA, Sento, Cope, Tkid on here shouting themselves out talkin mad shit....... ha ha, fukin toys.
actuallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
cope has come on here on more than one occasion for the sole purpose of talking shit. and he made it clear from the jump that it was indeed him. i.e. his username was "COPE2KDGOD" or something like that.
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well...write better.
my handstyle is completely different from my normal handwriting.
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dude zen, you need to work on your handstyles, cause those are hurting.
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nah, i think he's from planet earth, brah
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:/
seriously you guys?
you guys, seriously?
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someones already said it, but the backbone on that p needs to come down
Toys post here...
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some tags and shit