Dry Wretch
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i haven't drawn anything in mad long
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disregard the gang shit, i been listening to too much chicago shit
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outlines cause i'm bored
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i really like this one, i would just lose the negative space in the n and flatten out it's top though
like this
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the second one on the last page of the red marker is sick
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wow, if you're who i think you are, then you've come a REALLY long way. like holy shit.
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probably shouldn't write serch^
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no fill because 1. i suck at them and 2. i don't have any good colors.
just trying something new.
this is fucking sick, i just think the spine of the l is really thick and plain in comparison to the rest of the letters. and i think the e would look better if you made the top of it like the wisp on the top of the w
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stabbed me in the back
someone i trusted
let's get things straight
DON'T TREAD ON ME
i like your style.
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some new stuff
in the top one, the d is a little too busy compared to the rest of the letters, and you should probably try making the bottom of it more like the c
dont really like the way the bottom of the spine on the r sorta just curves up like that. i dont think it fits with the rest of the letters.
you need to work on proportion, like where the spine of the r joins the leg/head is way too wide compared to everything else
and you need to work on consistency with your extensions/serifs/whatever. like, one shouldn't end in one type of point/curl and another in a different type, if that makes since.
bottom one is dope. still needs tweaking, though.
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good, bad, retarded connections? what?
tell me something, dudes
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OH, you mean like this wretch?
but... these aren't bad?
and stop trying to fling shit at people whenever they give you advice. just because you might not think they're as good as you, doesn't mean they can't be right.
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just take it back to the basics, dude. there's no way to salvage this shit.
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i've been on this site for like 3 years now and i don't think i've ever read a single one of this kid's posts
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you see this? this is what your shit should look like.
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your r's are hurting. especially on the last one. you should probably keep the spines straight.
but i think that's mostly up to personal taste, so whatever
and you probably start putting more time into developing a better tag, because you've seem to got piecing and straights down, or almost down, and that's the only thing that's really bad.
your straights could use a bit of work in regards to proportion and uniformity too, now that i think of it
and that slotr is really messy. letters not consistent sizes, too much going on overall, especially with the s, and its just a bad s to begin with, blah blah
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this is really bad
in fact, wildstyle throw ups are always just a bad idea
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