Does it say Masoe? I like your M, but the rest of your letters are fucked up... Try and keep them like all the same size like your S is just like half the size of everything else. The little orange dude next to the E bring attention away from the piece since it stands out so much so try to keep it like a complimenting color... Even better, don't add one at all. Focus on your letters more and you'll get it eventually... I might be able to do a sketch for you if you want.