Does it say sam? The letters are actually pretty good, except the M isn't too great, but it's still OK. Just clean your shit up and lose the extensions like the one on top of the S because it just makes it look like some other shit letter. Work on proprtion too, like keeping all your letters the same width. For example your S is really thick in some places and then really thin in others. Ttry and get everything about the same width. Your A is perfect though, I love that