why write? Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 heres some shit by NBS cru, criticism wanted.... and first of all...heres dat bitch y'all wanted to see from da first sketch...heres ur flick for dat, good luck wit jerking off...:lol: http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/600422_5686533061778333021_vl.jpg'> damm shes hott :eek: http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/598446_1713684774077001035_vl.jpg'> http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/598447_3089252568771921096_vl.jpg'> http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/598461_8488032550739441531_vl.jpg'> http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/598459_1361419007059191733_vl.jpg'> ill update this on a daily or weekly process, sorry for bad quality on some of them.....hit me up wit some feedback :dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 that chick is the ugliest person ive ever seen, but its the hottest thing in that post:D sorry, no hard feelings i just had to say it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 3, 2003 Author Share Posted December 3, 2003 figured someone would say dat....thx a lot for da feedback :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 Originally posted by KiSe that chick is the ugliest person ive ever seen, but its the hottest thing in that post:D sorry, no hard feelings i just had to say it second that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 why be in a crew if you arent good?..i understand not being the best.. but even good.. cmon.. keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 Originally posted by shor why be in a crew if you arent good?..i understand not being the best.. but even good.. cmon.. keep trying true true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidTwist Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 ;) ;) ;) Well, here goes my opinion...the first piece is decent, a little too random of shit tho, looks like a baby drew came up with the letter structure with his foot...doesnt flow... For the next one..tame...whats with the face, could lose that... the 2nd to last is so so...3d is off a bit on the K and some other spots...last one cant really see but looks alright... post some more:crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 3, 2003 Author Share Posted December 3, 2003 iite...thx for feedback, hit me up wit some more, ill have more flix maybe tommoroww :loopy2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MUSTard Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 wow that bytch is one ugly blonde...im very disappointed..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 shit, did you guys see that splint on her finger, prolly from giving hj's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xTc_Angel Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 HuRRRL!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidTwist Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 ya that is an ugly bitch...post some more pix of her.....getting hit......with a bat.....or by a car....:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 3, 2003 Author Share Posted December 3, 2003 if i lost the character in the o of TOME and fixed it up, how would it be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
???2 Posted December 3, 2003 Share Posted December 3, 2003 Originally posted by KiSe that chick is the ugliest person ive ever seen, but its the hottest thing in that post:D sorry, no hard feelings i just had to say it :lol: third or fourth that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 4, 2003 Author Share Posted December 4, 2003 New http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/548/33166/p/602392_8076874743894886254_vl.jpg'> how does dis throwie look witout da face? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thiSINKsux Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 you need to get a better throwie .. do somthing with the first letter, your other sketches are kinda nice maybe a lil to much effect or what ever you were tryin for, but its ok . Just work on your throwie cus its not like you can get in and get up with one of your other sketches:yum: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidTwist Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 I mean you tell me if it looks better...i think it does by a long shot...good shit...post some more....:yum: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 4, 2003 Author Share Posted December 4, 2003 i think it looks good, but i wanna see wut otha people think of it...nah mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abort99 Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 I ,for one, happen to really like the english language and hate to see it botched by such words as "da" and "dat." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 Originally posted by abort99 I ,for one, happen to really like the english language and hate to see it botched by such words as "da" and "dat." yes, very true, but that tome with the char looks better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted December 4, 2003 Author Share Posted December 4, 2003 Oh, sorry not for typin perfect like everyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grandpa Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 look dude, obviously ur stuff isnt great but at least its a start...there are much more writers who are worse than you, and i wouldnt be surprised if some of them are bashing you in this post. so fuck them keep working at it...ull get ur letter structure down eventually..until then fuck that fat chick...and keep working at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 ill give some real advice this time, on the throwie, letter structure on all of them looks shitty, with a T, it doesnt look good to make the bottom and top stick out further then the middle part. the shape of the O is "ok" but far from good, it would look better if the hole was much smaller, and make the inner-circle of the O follow with the outer-circle of it. The M structure is off, M's dont have anything connecting them at the bottom like you have there, try disconecting it. The E just looks plain goofy, it looks like a lowercase B with a tumor hanging off of it, because there is no top to it, add a top part to make it look like an actual E. The throwie's shape as a whole isnt terrible, but try to keep the shapes constant, and flow with the other ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmeup Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 MORE LIKE: N O T H I N G B U T S H I T ! ! ! crew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUoNe Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 ZzZzZzZz yo this thread is weak yall kids need to work on simples and throws then progress neways just my opinion.. havent been on in a while and i didnt wanna start my own thread so im just gunna post some of my new shit in here if you dunt like it , deal with it :twitch: this is something i did for my wife http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00393422f00000001.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 Re: ZzZzZzZz Originally posted by BUoNe yo this thread is weak ya know, i wanna say something mean, but i like it, i only wanna say something mean cuz i havent seen ya before and you come out all like you the shit, but the sketch is hott, congrats on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUoNe Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 lol funny sorry about the attitude thou didnt mean to come lke that but o well too late thanks for the compliment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted December 5, 2003 Share Posted December 5, 2003 yeah dood, yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted December 5, 2003 Share Posted December 5, 2003 Thats Hott Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cam Posted December 5, 2003 Share Posted December 5, 2003 yall kids need to work on simples and throws then progress so do you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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