FIST Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 1st of all it's nice to be here, gr8 board you got here. 2nd I don't know if it's ok to start my own thread for feedback but I haven't seen anything considering this at the FAQ section! well this is my sketch, pretty basic, it's my style now, most of my sketches look like this 1. I write "FIST" i just made this sketch for a small battle. any advice will be welcome. oh and sorry for the fucked up quality http://img1.tapuz.co.il/forums/26852740.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 the advice thread is for this, but its cool. its clean and what not, so thats cool i immediatly thought "virs changed again" though, which is bad not bad all in all those, maybe a cleaner picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIST Posted February 6, 2004 Author Share Posted February 6, 2004 tnx for the reply, lol i know virs, i'm not him anyway. any tips? on what i can change? do better? add? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 personally i dont like how the s is, its hard to explain why, i also dont like how the letters connect, just let them be next to each other, not merging into each other, if that makes sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 simple, stick with simple for now how long you been writing? i know this thread is kinda old but i was just running through the threads on the first page here and saw it so meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIST Posted February 7, 2004 Author Share Posted February 7, 2004 I've been writing for something like a half a year. This is pretty simple... what kind of simple are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 its decent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 Originally posted by FIST I've been writing for something like a half a year. This is pretty simple... what kind of simple are you talking about? he's sayin stay simple like that for a while, then you will progress. Most new cats try to go way to crazy at first or too soon, so dont do that is basically what is going on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 its pretty good...i like it personally, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sies781 Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 not bad i think you should not fade out your lines and i would make the "a" and "f" the stand out letters. you know by having the "s" and "e" under the "a" and f." also i would have bigger holes in my "s" but thats just me. sies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InDY_500 Posted February 7, 2004 Share Posted February 7, 2004 i like ur shit but the only thing u could do to improve it is work on ur S a lil bit.... good shit though....keep working...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted February 8, 2004 Share Posted February 8, 2004 Originally posted by why write? its pretty good...i like it personally, keep it up i agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philth215 Posted February 9, 2004 Share Posted February 9, 2004 i like the letters a lot but i would shape up the S its too thick and blocky and doesnt match the other letters its dope tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 yes stay simple thanx for the explanation there onesecond couldnt have said it better myself. see, your problem with the "s" is that it has no holes between the lines which make it look scrunched up. theres not a problem with THAT but none of the other letters are like that, the "a" has a "hole" (heh a-hole) and the "f" and "e" are also open and not scrunched together like the "s" is. your letter format is colliding because of this. either open the hole on the "s" or scrunch the other letters to what the"s" looks like. but its actually not that bad.i like how you over laped and faded the letters and suprised you did it decently for the amount of time youve been writing. good job. feed us more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BobotheHobo Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 .........ditto............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted February 10, 2004 Share Posted February 10, 2004 Originally posted by MLTf4nt0m feed us more. yep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FIST Posted February 16, 2004 Author Share Posted February 16, 2004 tnx to all for the replys i agree on the S thing :) i'll post some more sketches soon tnx again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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