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NZ writer, wanting some feedback


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ok well i think it goes from bad to good..cause ur first one is a big mess, too many colors, i cant even c the letters..

in some of them the letters structure is pretty bad...

the stop sign one is hot tho^^ def feeling tht

ur piece scetch is alot better than the above ones, less color and alot more structure goes well!

The secound to last 1 is really well made, i reallly like it! if u add colors dont add to much tho i think, cause (my point of view) i think ur style is very crowded and if u add a hole lotta of colors + all tht mass of structure it wont go well

 

and tht last one is the best 1 i really like it!

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