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All opinions welcome.

not a bad start. Your K is tiny tho, make all your letters the same size to keep things consistent. also the hole in your R should line up with the back leg which leads me to believe youre not constructing your letters out of bars. That is step one in simple letters mastery.

Workin on somethin. plus i bought a graphics tablet.

i am always happy to see people draw the letter Y...

resto

Wow, i just realised this was aimed at me lol. Im fully aware of my level bro and i work at it everyday so i dont particularly care for your opinion. besides, i dunno where your attitude is coming from, you obviously cant take criticism when everywhere you have posted that throw people have said to "work on it" to say the least. Try to chill out and draw something better if you wanna keep the critics quiet. I dunno what the fuck is wrong with people in this thread... If you get some criticism you dont like get to fuckin work and prove the bastards wrong, simple as that. Plus a flick for going on... YOKAI loves you eski!

Im getting involved, my throws need practice.

I dunno weather i should continue down this simple route or not. Opinions?

There is something nice about that ADYOR stuff, dont like the pc piece tho.

eski, is that a throw? Its way over the top. Lose all the confusing shit and show me some pretty letters. Throws are meant to be simple.

mone. honourable mention to veritably clean.

Crackin idea MONE, i need some character practice. I did do an M but it was pretty subpar so i didnt post, fyi lol.

Spendr, simples. You have way too much going on in there. lose all the arrows, bits and connections. Let that happen later.

ignore the throw i did :P

WORD

Humor, nice stuff but your gettin smaller as the piece goes on, i notice you do that from time to time, take it a bit slower when ure sketchin and make sure everything lines up right. Still, good shit.

MONE all the way.

Space your letters out more, they overlap too much.　Try loosening up a bit too, its all really rigid and unpretty.

IOKA, nice to see you spreadin your letters out a little more cos your style is killer, especially that char from a while back, the skull head diamond eyes one. AZTEKA, always a fan. MEK, TESK, i hate you lol. Lots of correctness on this page. Messin with simples and only using pen. Always worth practicing simples. Also huge props to MEK for helpin me with my throw a while back.

im in, short and sweet 3 letter, i like it.

mclovin

All opinions welcome. Feel like i should have added some shapes to the fill :/

same problem dude, i think its down to practice.

First one gets smaller as it goes along and those extensions are really try hard. Extensions will happen when they are ready to happen, dont rush it when your basic letters structure still needs some work. Also, your L is tiny on that second sketch.