GrooveChampion

Pluto/Suspectoner Love the simplicity, you have some real style in those letters for how simple they are, i especially like the half colored purple one

You dont really need good markers, sharpies will work well, and i used to use colored pencils which also worked well

Echo- alot of times here people comment only on the descrnt stuff for the most part they dont comment on the crap or the good stuff, but in your case its the good stuff, real cool i like how you use big and small pieces to create your letters, keep it up i think you can develop an interesting style, would love to see you color some of them

yo HIGH, see if u can make it into some sort of cloud type thing, a green cloud maybe then add one of those radio active signals, or alternately out line the bottom swirls in pink and the top ones in brown

Really like this one, i think it looks real hot in black and white, i would suggest that if you color, go with a minimalist feel, just my opinion I have no idea why it is not showing up, oh well

Politics and Bullshit, I like the style, I HATE the coloring, i think it ruins it, i think bubbles should have warmer colors or 2 completely contrasting colors, also work on the character and throw out the crown

Yo bait just an observation, i have seen you post alot of stuff and one thing that i noticed is that the double lumps on your B keep getting more and more vertical, just an observation that amuses me, anyway cool shit as always, although i wish you would get off of this highlighter kick :p

not to shabby, as i can tell from the pic, looks pretty clean and pretty descent, i would say just keep your proportions and line width more the same, unless you were going for uneven esss

Vare One, not sure i understand, more proportion to what? I know the V is a little off but i think the rest are all matched in size Also yeah Ill hit you up with a Vare one i na couple of days xdontsleepx- Dont know much about throwies, but to me it looks good sorry i cant be more help, also dont know much about handies either, i dont get what a good handy is and what a bad one is, can someone elxplain that to me? (they all looks the same to me

can i get some feedback on the last thing i posted on page 141??, i want to know what i did wrong, or what is bad with it so i can fix it, say what i did right if yo want but id rather the bad

personally i dont like the colors, i dont think it makes the letters pop out, but i think your letters are good and i really like the simplicity of them

Just finished this one sorry about th elined paper, got into it and didnt want to stop the flow

Been drawing for a while tonight, i think this is my best letter structure yet anyway let me know what you think PS sorry about the lined paper, got so into it it just kept flowing, didnt want to stop

yo dude above me, spin i guess, thats some cool shit, i like the second set alot better than the first, you obviously had some art skills to begin with, cool now ehre are some new simples i did, for the clock one, use your imagination to make it a V, i know it a stretch but i still thought it was cool hope you like please give me some crits , thanks PS sorry for the bad bad quality, i couldnt get it any better, we have flourescent lights and its dark out, any tips on taking better pics as well??

Yeah i was looking at it and alot of the lines didnt stand out just in white, so i was like fuck it it cant hurt you know, then i started coloring with the ugliest color scheme but it actually tuerned out pretty descent, anyway might tweek it some more Also to everyone else, THE STICKER THREAD has alot of good simples i was looking at, they keep it simple just to make alot of stickers and shit, anyway thaqts just what i think

FREAK love the second one, the black and white one, i cant really comment on letter structure because mine isnt that good either, anyway, that i think is your best one

Just wanted to color this one, Now bacvk to sketching

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Melo, i know the shit i posted is far from good, but i do think it shows progress at least to me in letter form, this time they have some kind og common theme and it has more of a composition feel to it instead of just random letters

This blanko guy looks like a thing done by alot more famous writer named random (he does teh character "Buff monster" which is what yours resembles) but i do like the simplicity of it, perhaps give him more emotion, i think that something is still missing, to me it feels like it is missing something that will really make it your own

yeah i agree i think that is your best one, i would laos suggest certain things like on your E's to me it is not pleasing to look at the middle bar of the E come out past the other two, i think when you write your stuff and the lines are closer together it looks better

Ok was feeling inspired today, so i did this, i think it is the best ive done yet, still might move some lines around here and there especially on the E, but overall i think it is a pretty solid composition and will probably keep it looking very similar to this I know i need at arrow on the E or something similar to tie it all together, im not quite happy with where it is now and i think it should be facing inward to the left

yeah i did that, what im saying is i had a hard time getting it to flow with the rest of the piece, i didnt want to just make it look like and e, you know? anyway thanks

yeah i tried to put something on the bottom of the V, i have been struggling with V's simply because there are only so many ways that you can write one, but the more i draw it the more i see diff ways. thanks for the crits

Here are those simples i was working on, i think the bottom one is much better than the top, but i hate the colors, i was just treying to play with alot of colors at least i know now not to use these combos anyway tell me what you think Oh also any suggestions on the E's?? i really feel like they ruin it all, i kind of hit the wall with them and they kind of feel out of place