GrooveChampion

Melo, cool stuff i like the dark green one as well, the one i also like is the one with the 3 characters, but i really dont think the M flows well at all, it looks quite sickly Pecs your stuff is coming along nice i think it is getting better, i think that if you can get yourself a catchy first letter then your pieces will develop more Also i would like to thank everyone here for saying things like "simpler" i just didnt want to hear it for a while but the other day i was like fuck it so i started doing simples, and let me tell you i think i aready have improved, it is very important to have basic letter structure down, i will post some of these simples later to see if what i think is correct Late

I have some shit on page 138 that needs C&C, i have commented on about 3 people and no one gave me feedback, it would be much appreciated, thank you

Think I should color it??, i think it could turn out to be pretty neat, tell me what you guys think, also i just wanted to share it as well, get some crits and such, its prettty rough sketch but whatever

Yo Deos, i havent been writing very long as you can tell since im posting here, so you might want to take what im saying light heatedly, i think your shit is missing a personal touch, like it looks to technical and their isnt enough inspiration in it, its too straight forward, i really, really dig your stickers though, i think they have good composition

This shit right above me is tight, i like the colro scheme and all, how did you work on your letter forms? that seems to be what i am having the most trouble with, anyway here are my latest Also Just for fun here is the X-mas card i made for last year I have been trying to work on letter form hopefully it has improved somewhat from my last posts and these are more cohesive compositions anywa cant wait for the crits

also where can i fond more of that guys work, thats some hot shit

Ok i sort of get what you are talking about, is there anyone of mine that shows something like that?? I mean which one has the best letter structure? so i know what to work with, is it like using one font? should all the letters follow the same format? what im trying to say is for example is it like of i am using MS word how all the font looks the same? it should have some similarity betweeen letters?

Here is a dump of some of the shit i have been working on, trying to get the chops down before I commit to a good wall. The last comment i got said that i had good coloring but bad letter form. I was wondering if someone could perhaps expand on that? what exactly does "work on your letter structure mean?? can someone post a good example of what good letter structure is???

i like the first one the best i think its pretty cool

Here is a dump of some of the shit i have been working on, trying to get the chops down before I commit to a good wall

not to bad