billoboy2020

thanks for the fast feedback LUGR (and thanks for the others like joker or mr. yuck for taking this time and giving so constructive and high quality critique btw) I think i know what you mean by blobbed-out letters. Probably the A,T,N on the blue/pink piece or the A and N on the piece below that. Ive tried to bring some variety into it by not always cutting the bar with a straight line but I can see how it looks kinda weird now so thanks for that. I did a quick redo of my pen sketch, without the wonky legs. Ive tried to refine it as well and did a second sketch, tho i had trouble adding stuff/making new versions without changing up the original sketch too much.

Hey guys! How good/bad are these? I thought i got the basics figured out but i cant seem to get over the kinda straight letter pieces, to a point where i sometimes get frustrated and think i just lack creativity. Thanks for any responses, have a good day.

thanks man. i get what you mean by wet noodle looking, this isnt the first time you said it to me also lol. Im struggling to change my bars without them looking like a noodle tho.

how do you feel about this?

ah, i uploaded the wrong file. this is the right picture. dont know how to edit my post.

hey guys, how do u like these 2? strugglin alot with T

i have another question. what are some usefull threads on here that are good for toys to binge? there are so many im kinda overwhelmed lol

yea i realized the same thing after a while. i changed it and also i did the Ö bigger because i feel its kinda messing up the flow (i guess).and i took ur 3d bcz it fits so good.

ok i see. ive changed my drawing a bit and tried to overlap some bars. idk if like it more or less, im not sure if i should hide the bar of my R.

Ok man, that looks really dope and i gotta agree the Y looks stupid. Since u already, imo, perfected the piece i drew another with a similar style but kinda different. Another question tho, i dont know any rules about layering. See i always thought u should layer from left to right, so that the H is infront of the ö wich is infront of the R. I saw on ur sketch that u put the Y infront and i think that would give me more possibilities obviously but i always thought that was a no go.

thanks for taking the time man, looks really fucking dope. okey so i used ur drawing as help and this is what i got. im really bad with extensions and i cant really make the piece dance, if u know what i mean. also i suck with negative space i think.

ok thanks joker im gonna tell him that. I drew a lil bit in the last days aswell, i tried to write Hörbi (ö is a german letter, idk how to explain how it sounds but its something like the ea of early i guess) so Hearby would probably be the closest. Idk if these are any good, ive tried to make them pretty simple with nothing to fancy. im just trying to sketch alot over the winter. The last one isnt finished as u can see but i liked the R and the B so far and wanted to know what u think of it

What up 12oz one of my friends can draw really really well but hes still new to grafitti. He always sends me pictures of his shit and to me it looks dope. sadly tho i cant help him that much since im a big toy but i thought maybe if i post his work here u guys could give him a couple of tips. Thanks guys

ok thanks man thats something i can work with. What do u think of the looks of the throw in general? if time didnt matter i mean. gonna draw something easier now tho and upload it

darm brother why not. can u give me some tips. i really like it tbh

is this throw any good?

yea it does. thanks joker. have a great day

Ok man, tho i must say im not sure if you got my point. I dont have anything against the letter B in general, i know you can make it look dope and i still need to train alot to be able to but im more talking about Boba as a name. You know i can only play with 2 B's, O and A. Bates and Baker have more letters to play with. Same with your name. Writing 'Joja' would suck also. Idk man, i like star wars also alot, but i would like an objective critic on the name itself. And maybe some general tips for name choosing. Thanks for the reply tho man.

What up 12oz Im a toy with a couple of question and in need for critcal advice. Ive been following this thread for 1 week now and id like to thank Joker (and the others) VERY MUCH for still sticking around and helping us toys with great advice even though this forum is not as active as it used to be (sadly) I really like the advice u guys give and because im kinda struggling ive decided to make an account and ask a couple of questions. Ive peen painting on paper for a bit and i think this pictures is the best ive drawn. So i really love this name, but with the time i struggle to draw nice (more then basic) B's that look good because i feel like there is only so much u can do with a B. Ive seen many pics (mainly on nitro combis tumblr) and ive noticed that many writers dont have a B in their name and if they do it looks basic. This is not a problem per se bcz not every letter needs to look super special. But the thing is that my name consists of 2 Bs and one O so i feel like i cant do anything more than basic with this name and im kinda stuck. Thats mainly why im here. Maybe u will just tell me i need to get better and tbh im kinda thinking the same. But at the same time im thinking, why make it harder than it already is. u feel me? I thought about drawing Herby (is that a good name?) and if it sucks maybe you guys could give me some knowledge what makes a good name that flows well. Ive searched on reddit and other websites about the 101s of name choosing but i couldnt get a good guide. Anyway, thanks again so much Joker and all the others for helping us out. We all really appreciate it. Also, excuse any mistakes i made. Im not a native speaker but youll hopefully understand me.