@ Spawn-of-Sham
I am no expert or something, so I'll just say my oppinion, which is based on eye, rather than knowledge ;)
What does it say, exactly, it's rather chaotic imo, so I can't read it well. Though as I said it may be chaotic, though it ain't bad in the least. Hehe, sometimes chaotic can be good, which is portrayed here, it has this flow, at least for me, in which chaos goes about.
Just to warn you, this may sound weird, but in my twisted world, it's logic, rather than utter crazyness :P
If you didn't really intended this, then you may very well need to practice more on de-chaozination (is that a word, I guess not, but F that...).
Oh yeah, through the chaos, I can see a R and A, other than that, my eyes fuck me up to much :P
@ Bosdj, hehe, that's awesome, though may be quite do-able, for me, in a short while, maybe, hopefully. But thanks for posting that, it seems to have gotten me alot more info, about what you were talking about. This was the simplistic style you were talking about right, so I should learn to do that, before I should start bending, hook-ups, arrows, and bubbles...?
Kudos for both of u, for helping me, hehe.
EDIT: P.s I love the cracked rock theme, aswell as the bamboo, it's Ffing awesome, simplistic, but really adds that nice touch ;)