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stealthyxcougar

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  1. redeyed, i like the concept, but i think it'd have a little more flow if the letters were stretched out a little, the fill is sick though.

     

    zomb, looking a lot better, still have a ways to go, but it's definitely a step in the right direction.

     

    trying something new, touchntones and rusto

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  2. But the letters themselves don't make sense. You seem to have a legible handstyle, if you thickened that up then you could have a piece that made some sense. It's not that the ideas are bad, it's that the letter structure isn't there.

  3. freeofcharge, your G is sick, i think it'd look a lot better if you'd give the rest of the letters the same amount of negative space that you gave the G. it'd balance it out a little more

     

    hungriest hippo, looks like you're spending way more time on fills than letter structure, i wouldn't be able to tell what any of those say if it weren't for the tag in the second one. in my opinion letter structure is the thing that you need to get worked out first, once you get a basic concept of that then you can play around with fills. not hating, just letting you know what you need to work on. and those blue things don't make any sense at all.

  4. Is this your own work or anybodies?

     

    depends on who's posting, some people post their own work, some just post straights. i was under the impression that it didn't matter as long as it was straight letters

  5. From what i see he didn't go over any well established writers, just random walls.

     

    Throwys tend to be more bubbly.

    if it's just a bomb it's nice and simple. My advice is don't come to this thread looking for advice, just do you my man.

     

    He didn't post the pieces he went over. He and his dumb little friend with the bad tattoos went over some of the best writers in the area for no reason

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