yetsio
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Freak, the E and A are too close together
kotes, dope.
bottom of the page bump
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Freak, the E and A are too close together
kotes, dope.
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lurk
yetsio
i guess this goes here, no?
and skum gets my vote. thats fucking dope
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word. no problem. even if it is an old style, cant help progressing it, right?
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Your letter structure isn't weird, it's just a little off.
The leg of the R shouldn't connect to the backbone. It should connect to the loop.
And the middle bar of the H should actually be connected somehow to both sides.
And then just some shitty extensions. The cutback extensions (like on the top of the T) usually don't work. S try to stay away from them, or at least use them sparingly.
Also, the flow of the piece is weird. The W is one way, and then the RAT is the opposite way, and the H is just straighter. Try to keep it consistent. Like, have all the letters like \\\\\ or||||| or ///// or even mix it up /\/\/\
Just keep the flow consistent. One or two letters going the opposite way can kill the piece, like how it is in the second piece you posted. The S is all on it's lonesome.
And watch your spacing. The A is really hidden on the wrath piece,
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that JKS story is illlll.
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Another good example of how to rock a simple is Ichabod.
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That 'Here's your fucking simple' page is dope.
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here ya go eons3
I know I'm shouldn't be posting in this thread, but I just wanted to post the exchange here for him.
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Shaken- Your shit is toooo boxy. Loosen it up!
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pirate ship and toast...hahaha nice
word. was thinking the same thing.
and gerald.
edit : the fuck? VV
I dont even have those flicks.. hahah
edit2: now there gone... wtf.
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a few of the latest
Stop biting. Do simples. Go to toy thread.
Sener, I'll try to get you your exchange by the end of the weekend. If not, then by like, Monday. Sorry, I've been really busy lately.
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Those two charachs dont look like theyre from the same person...
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here ya go eons3
Word man. I dig it. The E and O are ill as hell.
Ill get your shit soon.
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Nuse - Your piece for Dies would be so much more legit if you took out a few extensions. Some are just wack.
If the circled ones were taken out, and the backbone of the D was curved instead of straight, this piece would be dope.
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Just - Too inconsistent. Both in widths and style. Dumb it down.
Sade - Simples.
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Still needs a background and some more shit on the "Six Tre One" straight.
Bump for crits?
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crap.
Got that right...
Do some simples and bars. Keep your widths the same. All that jazz.
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Still needs a background and some more shit on the "Six Tre One" straight.
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That Katelin piece is wack..
Simplify it some. Loosen it up. Its really stiff and blocky.
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bump for crits.
Raske: not too mr wigglish. that R is fucked up though. the leg should come out of where the loop touches the backbone. also watch your widths.
Bare: that last handy is better, but on the R, dont have the leg cut back to the left at the bottom. sorta makes it look a little like a B. Try a script-ish E too. or just lowercase. should look better.
Kotes: pretty dope, but watch the E on the second sketch. it's pretty fat.
NVS: your trying too hard. simplify it.
N8angelic: do keyboard letters
Bakup: take off those little extension shits that you have goin on, and loosen it up some more.
Weakfinger: dope.
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Toys post here...
in Paper Chase
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says eons.
some crits would be nice.
ill crit some other shit in here in a lil bit.