snielsgreen

Hey fathem, good idea writing ur name over and over.....my advice would be to continue that except do some tags and a simple per page....keep both of them so phucking basic that u feel like ur in kindergarden....this will help at first with preportions, positioning and the relationship between the letters in ur name(this is important since its YOUR name)....studying ur tag will help u with ur simples and visa versa but only if u keep it basic....fair warning, this shit gets boring but u gotta understand the basics first so keep at it....the tags u posted would be strait if u didn't bend ur bars, like the top bar of the F pointing down and the connection in ur H from the vertical bar in the middle to the bar on the side should be ghost as well....no doubt that eventually ull be able to understand when things like that r appropriate, but right now they aren't.... check this...if u look u can see the my letters are space differently and the width of my bars aren't all exactly the same (that's bad)....I don't feel like explaing what a bar is, hopefully u understand or someone else will explain it to u...point is I tried to do it like this PHAT... Hope this help This is like graffiti school....im not sure this is a good thing O_O

^^^^^^^^^I pray that ur full of shit O_O

Just felt like it....boned the E, too lazy to re-do O_O

Fair enough, I guess...next time I want to ask a graffiti related question I won't go to a graffiti based website.....ill just google it O_O

Phucking raw ^^^ O_O

Damn, zues is one of the illest graff names I've ever hears, wish I woulda thought of that O_O

Phuck man, I wish u had half the brain to realize how stupid u sound...u could at least ask some questions before u judge me...for a writer not to study other cities styles (especially philly hands) is premature....also, I have studied my city...there is no style that originates here persay...the history of my city (as far as the writers who r origanally from here) starts MAAAYBE mid-90's if not later...more importantly than that those writers and most of the writers after them came and then left because of the poor canvas my city offers or because of one of the best buff squads in america, if u want ups here to last more than 3 to 7 days than u must go hard and choose ur surfaces wisely....Not to mention that right now we have the largest amount of writers that we've ever had and it's still a joke compared to other cities that r as big as ours..now don't get me wrong, we have writers with some ill steez but 95% aren't from here and don't bomb...the reason for this is because I live in one of the largest tourist spots in the country (hense the super buff) and most people move here thinking its a good place to retire or raise kids or live a better life all together....they r wrong of course...now, there r a couple writers that come to mind that r from here that have some fresh styles and I have and still am learning from them but in no disrespect to them it simply isn't enough...I could continue but lets just say that ur right....plus all I was really asking was if there was a specific style of hands that orginated outside of america O_O

I wanna see a specific style of hand that orginated outside of america....can someone hook a human up?........philly hands r the phucking shizz, graff would seriously be nothing with out them....studying philly hands has improved my hands a billion fold....I like cali hands too, there not real crazy but they have a certain approach that's very unique....I also like peanut butter O_O

The width of ur .bars r inconsistant....the left bar on ur R's bend at the top and it makes them look weird....the spot ur bar bends should be in direct corilation with the flow of the entire word....honestly, I think it would help a lot if u went even simpler...its absolutly true wat alts said a page or two back....going back to simps will fortify and improve ur shit...as a matter o fact, I think ima have to take that advice and apply it my self Snizzle grizzle O_O

I like how nuce comes and shits on erything wit his phreshness...oxymoron. Put this together about two months ago....ignore the arrow(althought I think if it was cleaner and not as loud it would be ok).....let me know Phathead and the mullet zombie

Does any one know any history or somewhere I can find some history on a crew from LA called 6th wit a member named dozner?....the name might be spelled different....don't give me shit for asking this question in the sketch thread, I have a lagitament reason for it....plz give me some input or ignore O_O

Fucking A....^^^that throwie made my dick hard....(its a metaphor, chill)........shaken, do that except make it ur own...haha, thats not obvious O_O

The a is my favorite letter here...id say revise all the other letters to match its style....that's a personal prefrence thoo...bomb the world O_O

I write phathead....what's a perth kid? O_O

Grass ass(ty) O_O

Phucked this one up on several levels...oh well....look what I can do!! :D...critique O_O

So ur sayen I shouldn't bend my bars yet and I should continue werking on strait letters untill I understand something about letter structure that im currently misunderstanding? Skribbled this together before I sketched the last one I posted...the P makes more sense I think???

can I get a constructive crit on the bull shit I posted two pages back Graffiti soap opera O_O

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Don't know y I chose this one out the stack......titty slap kinga orlando O_O

Wow...that's fucking lame as phuck O_O

Seriously zaire, ur a phucking monster.....that machine style is fresh....I hope u stay in orlando O_O

I conquer, specialy the head with the star on the fourhead http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii226/snielsgreen/IMG00057.jpg....and the sketch that has the fuzzy ball in the begining reminds me of seak from germany O_O

Exchange with tour.......???? http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii226/snielsgreen/IMG00056.jpg O_O

U spelled my name wrong but point taken....thanks :) O_O