sneekatoke
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kater i guess, but that k looks like an s by the way...
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a quick 'mock' with old crayolas.. kinda gave up after the o because my daughter decided she'd help fill when i wasnt lookin, haha..
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awzk - you need to start with simples. I can see your letters, but the structure is crap, the consistancy of the letters does not match up, and the random cut-ins and extensions make it look worse.
twyst - your fills are always dope. i like your fill on this one as well, but the letter structure is out there. you should refine that but make it symmetrical, it could be the bidness then...
sech - so glad you lost those wtf arrows, lookin better, id work on makin your extensions make a little more sense...
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if you adjusted the bend of the m to the center, it would be dope..
ha, thanks its not mine i just cut it from the bottom of a beer case thing...
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i see no m...
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mawks, way too many bends and loops and stuff, you cant read it... make it simpler...
i try...
*i am just now able to see the highlighter fill...it must be dark in here
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^^haha, his is the one not filled in man... the filled one is shittier...
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sech i think you should lose the random arrows shooting out of your stuff...
..that is always distracting imo...
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that 2nd phathead needs a thicker outline like the 1st imo...
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Speak - i wouldnt try philly hands yet man, id get some simpler steez first...
Shaken - that sybils pretty cool, but id put a thicker outline on the violet, like you normally do..
D4 - sane, right? id prolly not write that, but id work a little more on letter structure. its not horrible but its not good either...
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crack town was a pretty hard movie... i'd recommend it
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the unicorn blood really makes the rolls of fat POP, ya know....?
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^whoa man thats dope, what kind of markers did you use haha...
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Re: Dear ________, - no homo
dear work,
fuck you for being tomorrow in the early morn, may you be easy to sneak out of and early to die.
you know who it is.
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nah man, thats his stuff, he was showing you how you can paint if you practice every day...
drunken exchange from a lil while ago...
a collection of e's and a random s...
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thats dope alts
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moar bookz...
theres random arrows, your lines are shaky, and letter structure is weak and inconsistant.
i'd focus on...
SIMPLES
...and save your pricey paintz for better renditions of your work.
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that squint is the bidness...
those little things on the left of the s reminded me of wolverines claws from xmen, ha
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So, I bought a sketchpad; nothing special, just a cheap sketchpad from the Dollar Tree. I get it home, and I start filling it with simples; I had about 20 simples in it, and I was working on another. Guess what happens next. My Mom, spills her drink on it when checking out some of my work. Welch's Grape Juice all over my sketchpad; 20 simples down the drain; ruined.
I was compiling a bunch of good ones for a post to show that I've been working at them, and now I have nothing. Shit, son; back to square one.
How's everybody been?
sucks man,
but at least it was simples. simples are more for your own improvement and basically getting used to drawing clean letters... so your simples weren't for nothing...and just go over the grape soda...
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24'd?
looks to me like you got some tampons in the upper right corner...
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... please do yourself a favour and leave 12oz for a while and go fill about 2 or 3 a4 pads with simples..
^^^this.
people have let you know that you need to do simples or something ...but you keep posting the same stuff everywhere.
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^^if you haven't already, read the book...
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way better vossy!!
id widen the bottom y extention bar, and round those points on the s's and y (or make points on the v maybe o)...
..clean up your lines a little, make them a little more consistant..
but thats lookin way better..
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better, but on the O, the inside circle is too small, makes it look waayyy fatter than the other letters... either make the inside circle bigger or dont put anything in there...
Toys post here...
in Paper Chase
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quick freestyle... composition is all off, but thought id add somethin ..