I think the bars at the top and bottom of the I are too big creating too much space between the letters also the way the N and A slope away from each other make it seem almost like 2 words
I think the second one has a solid foundation for working on, i like the S and N overlap and do prefer the A on the second much more than the first A
On the first one there is too much space created from the shape of the I
I don't quite know what you mean by one on one tutoring, it is just a case of practise. Do simples til u can do them in your sleep, then experiment with the letters
I got a blackbook I started about a month ago has about 10 pages left and I have about 4 other books I have fellied in the last 3 months
gonna start getting A3 sized books and going big haha
I think they are both dope Freak but the top one just takes it for me
Donald I really like that, I just feel the S could do with some work
Last, just work on keyboard simples for now before you expand
ok what i have been thinking is to try and make the PU and the GE like they are dripping in slime from the ghost and maybe a red R with a purpley background or maybe a sewer scene.
what you think or is that going to far for a simple battle
oh and hyper thats a sweet onw you gone for a name change or just juggling about
I like that Freak, but no disrespect I know you can do better (i know was rushed lol)
also had this idea for the battle, just rough sketch cos duno whether to use this either lol
simple I was gonna use for the battle but couldn't think of a character to go with it and also after seeing whos entering thought would need to try a bit harder lol but hey thought I would post it