Vertigo

Bonez- I like the first and the second. On the first i don't care for the block of white on the letters and as E_B_A mentioned the arrow needs 3d Sank-Personally i don't like the new S, i think the old one was better and more distinguished. Wease- On your bubble-ish throwies you overlap the A way too much. I alos dislike the random lines of colors but thats just my opinion. Aide- try a bit more simpler things. Learn how to draw straight lines. I's and A's are always tough for me so I try to steer clear of them. Also try and make your letters all the same side. Get used to your letter and how they flow and how they are formed.

Crystal, i would love to see the second of a nice flat brick wall. I like how it fades from light grey to dark grey but I suspect that, that was the cameras fault.

was the fill intentional or a mistake?

not sure if i like the curls but good job none the less.

the s is awesome Duse

post revised. saves time hehe.

Any writers in KC? hit me up in a PM

Anyone want to do an exchange. My word is Zero.

Thanks man.

You got some nice stuff blink. I like the coloring and 3d.

my friend is getting some stuff for me. thanks for the tip though.

yeah i understand that i'm precticing doing simple letters and handstyles with a can, but who says I can't draw on paper more complex things? All I am asking is for some help n adding extensions onto the word zero because I can never get the extentions on the z and the o to flow well with the e and r

I want to get good at drawing my word in all aspects of graffiti before I go out and bomb, so i won't be so much of a toy when I decide to do peices.

Can ayone point me in the right direction of how and where I should put addon's to my throws. Word is zero and I am having a hard time tryin to do it. Any help?

ugh fucking sharpie. I know the drop is off. a lot off. oh well.

crits please. More clean less sketchy.

Thanks sub. Nice, life, like the colors.

Bump for more crits please. Anyone wanna do an exchange?

hehe, well I am really in it for the criticism and stuff. A smaller community of writers is more help than a bigger one like 12oz in my honest opinion. I'm not desperate i just don't really have many friends that are big into graf and would get up with me. Makes me feel safer if there is 2 people. I would be getting up if there was someone else with me. And what makes you think you can alter what I do by typing a couple of words? I am not trying not to start any beef or anything but what the hell makes you think you can change me? Thanks for the crits btw, its just a simple skeleton. Just trying to get a bit of flow from the the z to the o. I am never good at flow, any advice would be helpful. Thanks again.

Two simples, please criticize.

BUMP for more crits

Kay man. I'll stop writin' Dfekt. Sweet name by the way. suks I didn't think of it first.

bump years.

Crits if possible.

Funkchild, I don't really like your throwie on the truck bucause of those smudge things on the letters. It makes it look unclean. Your e's by the way don't really look like e's either. Blart, nice job. Your exclamation point looks a bit bland compared to the rest of your throw but other than that it looks cool.